|Reviews for Monster|
| Epikku Neko chapter 2 . 7/14
Please update. This story is amazing...I want to read it to the end! I. Want. To. See. The. Ending!
| TORTURED chapter 2 . 2/12
I love it so much on how Nana scolded the four and scared the shit out of them~ Oh do please update! I wanna see them break and cry and panic and... and... JUST DO SOMETHING!
| Masi13 chapter 2 . 2/6
GOSHDANGGIT! It was gettin good but *sighs* Writers block is goddamn fucking bitch innit?
| Demon Kai13 chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
Well, will you look at that!? A CLIFFHANGER! Please update soon, its a great story so far.
| Hottstuff JK chapter 2 . 6/8/2015
Long story short, Tsuna was beaten half to death in his house. See.
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 2/23/2015
I like it! poor tsuna
| Assasin8 chapter 2 . 8/22/2014
Well DAMN. You give us something like THAT and then don't update for a YEAR? That is just EVIL! I gotta say, the angst in this story really builds it up. It's almost endearing how much everyone cares for Tsuna, and the fact that most of this chapter was told from Gokudera's point of view really just made it ten times better. He's the one with the shortest temper, and he's the one who would show the most anger if Tsuna ever got hurt. Because it was him, I really felt the frustration, anger, and concern that everyone else was feeling! In writing this fic, you made some really good choices in terms of point of view, pacing, words (because you know that these guys are as pissed as they should be, they'll be cussing like that), and story structure. I do however think the summary sounds rather inaccurate, considering the only thing written in Fon's point of view so far was roughly three paragraphs... Nevertheless this has been absolutely fantastic so far! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Aliahthewolfgirl chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
Please update soon, I literally cannot wait! I love this story to much! You're so amazing for writing/posting this, it's just so...AMAZING :)
| Tosurviveistokill chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
| Summerluvspocky chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
| PurpleSong chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
You can't just end it here! What happened to tsuna? What is reborn gonna do?! What are they all gonna do!? Please update!
| pollo chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
This chapter most definitely does not make up all those long, long, long years, YEARS, you had us waiting.
How could one be so cruel? TTTT
And now, you left us wondering one again, what in-Primo's-shiny-pants happened to our poor, cute, adorable dame-Tsuna?
Oh, Nana. You poor,d dear. I cried during the slapping scene because it made me realize, she's gonna be facing more of this situation in the future. Heck, she really did buried her son in the future.
| AiMila chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
well damn...i really want to know who had the gut to hurt our little tsuchan like that and still be able to sleep at night. please may the culprit be someone that is involved with the belief of some of the other decimo candidates and that the reason tsuchan didnt fight back was because he didnt have a chance...ill be completely honest im shocked beyond believe at the thought that someone can do that to another human being even thought this isnt real but it is a gateway to what people r capable of doing with a goal in mind being for rage or something else.
| calypso tchaka chapter 2 . 11/30/2013
I think you are certainly making progress with the story, and I am curious to find out who attacked him... I wonder about all the blood on Nana and under her fingernails, though. Or perhaps its just me. :)
Thanks for sharing the chapter! May you enjoy your weekend x
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2013
Very very very! goid i really liked the part, i dont care. Fuck reborn
oh fuck you too
it was so funny and i hope you continue soon it was reaallly! good!