Reviews for Web of Lies in search for Knowledge
Candy Hathaway chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
i liked it! great plot, it's off to a great start ). can't wait for the next chapter!
imawesomerthanyou16 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This is great. although the draft is kind of rough, and the sequence of events is kind of choppy, all in all i really like it. Rigg is extremely sarcastic, Umbo does some dumb stuff, and Param is cut off. I think you wrote about the characters just right. the only thing that seems sort of ooc are the expendables. Remember, they are MACHINES they need to be ALL KNOWING. don't get discouraged because u aren't getting a lot of reviews. its probably just because there aren't 2 many people reading pathfinder.