Reviews for The Spark
plutomoon2 chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
this story is really good and i hope to read ch3 soon so please update when you can and thanks for the story
Ketsy chapter 2 . 10/5/2011
While the writing style can use some work, it is an interesting story that I'm hoping you will continue.

To the first note, it seems you are forcing yourself to confirm too closely to the original sequence of events and it is making your writing seem a bit unnatural. Other than that, please continue.
Jaaku-san chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
You have intrigued me sir. Pray do continue this fine story, and quickly lest I perish from languishing in suspense.
Djar chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
angry glint.

Can it be!

Will a wild Pokemon appear?
Greki chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Nice, nice. Can't wait for the next one. This is certainly a different kind of story.
Djar chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Well other than being a little small i'm interested in this.

And about the talking about ponies stuff, you know there are several places with this conversations.
cross-over-lover232 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
i cant wait to see how you alter! also, if you have a G mail account drop me a PM with your name and i'll gladly talk and RP a few ideas with you!
sulfur angel chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Oh, snap! That doesn't sound good.