|Reviews for Spartans from the Beyond|
| ToaGaimZXA chapter 4 . 2/3
This is a good story, I wonder the Joes will react when they meet the Spartans?
| Michael chapter 4 . 10/23/2015
Hurry up make chapters to this story
| Leeyu chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
pls I have been waiting for an update for ages pls continue the story.
| Romulus98 chapter 4 . 5/16/2015
So I was like looking through your stories and this one pricked my attention.
It's really good and I'm wondering if you will possibly update this? Considering the last update date...
Please get back to me if possible?
| SmokeTinyTom chapter 4 . 3/27/2015
Possibility of continuing this Story?
| TheFishKing chapter 4 . 1/24/2015
hay are u going to continue
| Shadow Side chapter 2 . 12/25/2014
At first I taught this was gonna be boring but now things are spicing up. :-D
| Silky Button chapter 4 . 6/20/2014
I'm really sad this was ended. love g.i joe and halo xovers
the only thing I noticed is your past and present tense fluctuations throughout the story
love this story! :D
| Dreaming Star Traveler chapter 4 . 4/20/2014
Please please please Update soon! This was an amazing story!
| AK74FU2 chapter 4 . 4/17/2014
Wait... you named John Johannes... that defeats the purpose, albeit it's a very good story, but naming him Johannes seems a bit much. Why not keep the name with John Sev Clover. Sounds a bit better, it makes John's name sound German. In fact, Johannes is a German name. Just to say something, the Pelican, since some were remade using Forerunner materials, would shrug off the Vulcan miniguns. It may put dents, but that's pretty much it. THough they would be small dents, or probably just scratches, it Forerunner metal for crying out loud.
| battlecruiser03 chapter 3 . 3/31/2014
...IT'S SPARTAN TIME!
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
| UDLLORD chapter 4 . 1/29/2014
Its been quite a while since you last Written any thing on this hope you update this soon
i know u quite busy with lost legacy and all just hope this one is up soon
| mkeeg91 chapter 4 . 9/18/2013
a pretty good story. love the crossover selection.
some things seemed odd. minor, non-important things though.
- a manor with two master bedrooms? ;)
- Chief willing telling the Joe's who his organization is.
- some of the emotions expressed by your Spartans seem way too cheerful compared to canon Spartans who don't show much emotion even among their teammates
- the super fancy cars (Audi is a little over the top for Spartans)
- the need for a manor at all when there are only 2 of them
besides that, I am really enjoying this
though I do admit I wish this was a John/Scarlett and Li/Cover Girl story ;)
hope to see more!
| MEleeSmasher chapter 4 . 3/7/2013
I like this. I want to see more, man! I haven't been this excited since reading Freedom Guard's story GI Joe Halo.