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HermioneGranger chapter 25 . 6/1
Guest chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
This hit me close to home. Damn.
ToQuinnWithLove chapter 31 . 8/22/2016
Wonderful job, I loved this story all the way through. A very real and detailed account of going through an ED. I'll be reading the sequel next :) thank you.
ecoenarciso chapter 31 . 8/1/2016
I loved this story! Thank you for having written it! Now I'm gonna reading the sequel :)
Love Of Blood chapter 20 . 1/15/2015
I promise to read more, later
Brian1972 chapter 30 . 11/6/2014
Intense and very good.

Personally I think that sometimes it is written as if they are all still minors. As an adult Hermione should have greater possibilities to avoid certain confrontations. I.e. all she had to do to avoid Madame Pomp. to send her to a mindhealer or to admitt her is to leave Hogwarts. Second minor critique is how Hermioneinteracts with her friends sometimes. Most prominent the interaction direct after the summer, since she really felt abadonned and betrayed (all on Ron's side) she should have let it show more (i.e. use this circumstance as excuse not to eat with them). Last little critique is her instant drop in grades. While I agree that such conditions will likley lead to such problems it should be more gradualy.

But those a minor remarks. Overall the story is really good!
hermionefan1983 chapter 21 . 10/11/2014
hermionefan1983 chapter 21 . 10/11/2014
i thought her worse fear is getting FAT?
hermionefan1983 chapter 21 . 10/11/2014
but hermione isnt 91 pounds because she faked that number with the spells pansy gave her!
hermionefan1983 chapter 20 . 10/11/2014
so hermione's animagi is a dolphin? COOL! althought i would have thought it to be a lioness?
hermionefan1983 chapter 16 . 10/11/2014
she cant throw up anymore or cut herself anymore because of ron etc being with her ALL THE TIME! did the midwitch warn them about the cutting too?
snapefan1983 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
its not anorexia its BULIMIA! ron and harry hermione need to get THAT right!
hermionefan1983 chapter 4 . 10/10/2014
is snape in this story?
hermionefan1983 chapter 2 . 10/10/2014
which one really happened what Ron said or what hermione said happened?
hermionefan1983 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
did she apparate? or was it a porkey?
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