Reviews for Error, fairytale magic input failure
LadyHiyorin chapter 16 . 5/29
This is so cute! Love it so much!
Sophia chapter 16 . 4/2
I freaking love this oml
yousuck chapter 2 . 3/29
thissuckssohard
woofyy chapter 16 . 3/17
It was a very good story :) I was hoping for a more intense make out session but the ending was fine. I was surprised that Kagura was pregnant before marriage seeing it was tradition about not kissing the face or something before marriage, as mentioned in the earlier chapters, so I didn't think they would get THAT intimate before hand. I liked how you kept the characters as close to what their personalities really are as possible. Anyways, keep up the good work. Good luckies with your future stories :)
Vanessa chapter 16 . 10/27/2016
Hi poakkis, I just finished reading your story in one shot. I enjoyed it, thanks for a simple sweet story!
Atlancia chapter 16 . 10/9/2016
Hello :-)

I decided to write a review as soon as I finished your fic, so here it is: I really loved your story! I think it was very well written and you grasped the characters quite well. Sure, they were a little bit OOC (especially Kamui; but I liked your version of him, so that's okay) but that happens if the universe is not the same as the one in the original anime. The characters have different memories and experiences, so they are consequently a little bit OOC. And I don't think it's bad you didn't write any citrus, actually I was quite happy since I don't really like it.

I hope you keep writing und having fun telling your stories :-).

Anna
Blue Lilybell chapter 7 . 10/5/2016
OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER 3333
THEY'RE JUST SO SWEET ESPECIALLY WHEN SOUGO GENTLY BRUSH HIS FINGERS THROUGH KAGURA'S HAIR XD *internally screaming*
Sorry for the capslock but they're just so cute I can't even
Shingekinolife chapter 16 . 8/6/2016
Ah I couldn't log in to review but I just had to leave a review regardless!

OMG. This story. Is. Everything.

You kept it short, simple and so very very sweet. I don't know how but I ended up laughing one minute and then tearing up the next. Fantastic job with this story! I just got into this fandom and saw everyone shipping these two for reasons I couldn't quite get... But after reading your story, I'm just as crazy about them. Lovely fic!
bakabakareader chapter 16 . 6/15/2016
love this man good work!
Guest chapter 16 . 5/23/2016
IT WAS MOTHERFOOKIN AMAZING! I LOVE YOU POAKKIS! (But the Sakuya shit with Kamui, even if I knew it was gonna happen, killed it for me, but that's another story)
Isosceles chapter 8 . 5/20/2016
This is literally the only time that I appreciated Kamui's presence in the story. Good game, Kamui, good game. You did good on choosing Okita.
Isosceles chapter 6 . 5/20/2016
I WAS LITERALLY SQUEALING WHEN I WAS READING THIS CHAPTER OMFG AGHGHGHGH! I FOOKIN LOVE IT
mitsuki chapter 16 . 5/7/2016
Everything was so cute!
The whole story was amazing!
I really enjoyed this 16 chaptets!
You deserve all the kudos of the world!
Such a lovely, nice and funny story!
I loved the way you presented kagura and sougo relationship!
Awwww and the last part! So cuteeee~~~
Thanks you so much for sharing with us the fic!
I hope you continue writing...i would love to read another okikagu fic from you someday x3
Addicted-to-OkiKagu-and-BTS chapter 7 . 4/28/2016
awww sooo cuuute god damn it!
Maxxii chapter 16 . 2/11/2016
Hey,

Just wanted to let you know; Your story, this whole story, is utterly awesome! Right now I just finished reading it for the second time (the first time being a view months ago) and I absolutely love it. I can just see it playing out in my head. The way you keep them fighting and swearing at each other fits so well and as a Okikagu-lover the fluff parts are making me giggle out loud! I know it's already been a year since you updated and finished the story but I just wanted to give you the kudo's you most definitly deserve!

Great job on the story, I really loved all sixteen chapters and I hope you yourself are happy about the outcome and doing great yourself! I really hope you'll make more Okikagu stories!

Xxx
Maxime
(From Holland)
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