|Reviews for Heaven and Earth|
| kevslave chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
GOoooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOo oooooooddddddDDDDD!
| Elia950 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
this is pretty nice.. maybe a little more background on the characters and how things arrived to be like trhey are..
i am a huge fan of Hibiki.. and while it i s strange to not read of her as interested in kusekegawa.. it still is interesting..
keep going :-)
| Jared Someone chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
First i want to apologise on how long it took to review this story, just been so busy with things like school and work.
I think the story is interesting, the way you have described things has allowed me as a reader to be easy realise how they are feeling, which is what you want them to do.
It's an interesting plot line you have going, and it's interesting the relationships you have created between the characters.
The small amount of humour you have put in the story (Which is necessary for this story) is great, it made me chuckle, and if you are creating a story with dark emotions, you want to keep it small humour, so as to make sure that the reader doesn't go from one emotion to another in the same scene.
All in all a really good story, very interesting concept, and i hope this was what you were looking for in a story :)
| ikcjjt chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
its excellent. i love it. keep it up. We need more change 123 stories. :D
| neighborehood chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Okay, so i finally managed to check out this fic. I haven't read Change 123, but i'll try and start it one day. Just that i dont read ecchi or anything...porn sickens me.
Good writing overall tho! Good luck!
| JSeru chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
It's a little depressing, but there's nothing wrong with that! I loved it! COME, LET US SPREAD THE GLORY THAT IS CHANGE 123!