Reviews for Cinderheart&Heathertail: The Final Battle
Random Beaver chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
Haha (sorry I've got mental problems)
I love the idea! Imagine Cinderheart, the next Tigerstar! Plus Heathertail was so immature, that slut should be with breezepelt (she is anyway) GO CINDERHEART! :p
PS Heathertail would never chase Lionblaze like that as she does not have a crush on him anymore
maddie chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
so does lionblaze love cinderheart
shortcomings chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Kinda creepy! It's like Cinderheart lost control of herself she would never do that! By the way I'm Team Heathertail
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
sad so sad stupid f**** cinderhearth
Aquatalon chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Sad I hate cinderheart heathertail was just trying to be nice
robinwing chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
oh... my... god... do you not like cinderheart or something?
Amanda chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
omg that wuz the scariest children's story ever...
Nyarp chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
... o.O That was completely unexpected.

Nice job, even though I don't like LionxCinder. P
EmpoleonsFlygonsAndHydriegons chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Sorry, I don't mean to be rude, but I don't think Cinderheart would act like that, and I think that the ending was kind of sad. Also, sometimes you forgot quotation marks and words.

But If it was a different couple, like crowXleaf and Leafpool kills Nightclud, or the other way around, It would be Great!

So good job!