cabra chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
wow, that was sexy :) you pictured both of them so well.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Very nice. :)
GOODBYEFRIENDS chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Oh these two are utter perfection.
You wrote this wonderfully. :)
rabidpandaren chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
This is fantastic! I must have read this eight or nine times by now. I'm such a huge fan of this pairing and the way you write stays true to their characters while mixing in fantasy lemon flawlessly. I you really nailed this one and you left me wanting more. I wish there was more Nnoiliel like this! Excellent work!
Fatal Mars chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
YA! I really liked this! I love this pair it is so demented and they don't try to hide it. which is the best part. I love the struggle for dominance it makes me so happy and the end line was killer!
murasaki chapter 1 . 1/31/2012

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hues chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
This is so delicious I can't even think of a review.
blackkitty27 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
awsome u kept them all in character

y is ther not that many views?
Nutty Fruitcake chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
This was just PERFECTION.
Ulquishinee chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Aww i really liked! :D
ShallowGlass chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Absolutely incredible! You potrayed Nnoitra so expertly even though it was an act that would be hard to describe given the characters' feelings toward each other. Very well done.
MiSs. TeRy514 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Wow, just wow
lmaosfomgcslhs chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Beautiful. Nnoitora is so in character it's unbelievable, even through such an out of character action. The ending was very satisfying and you have a lovely vocabulary! I loved it! And the pairing is amazing too. Hope to see mu h more from you!

Ps. How on earth has no one else reviewed?D: