Reviews for Deliberations
Mistysky M.M.M chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
How sad. How could someone react to that.?
champylin chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
... it's so sad but very beautifully written... I can totally feel penelo... I love reading your stories. I like this twist better than the other stories... haha, it's just that Penelo is the first to tick. like Larsa is kinda slow, and it's just wonderful. I hope you'll write a sequel where Larsa would be the one to chase her... I'm just a sucker for happy endings. LOL
CatherinexxKC chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Gahhh! This was such an amazing one-shot! Made my heart-achee!

I love how you make it reality and not some kiddie fairy-tale. 3

Great job. :3
Nagasasu chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Oh, man, the tension and heartbreak is so palpable. The instant we see of Larsa growing too makes the fall-out all the worse. Gah, wonderful writing. :)
chalkbutterfly chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
I think you just broke my heart... It is sad to know that there are such huge differences in their social standing, and I suppose that after the story ends, there are rules that our poor heroes have to abide by. Reading this made my chest ache, but in a good way. Well done!
Moon Faery chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
PENELOOOOOOO. LARSAAAAAAAAAA. ;-; For being such a smart boy, Larsa can be SO STUPID. Doesn't he even realize the signals he was sending?

This is wonderful, if heartbreaking. :'(