Reviews for HachiDori
lydia chapter 4 . 12/5/2013
Lol team ed love it I really want a shirt like that
Aiswarya chapter 25 . 6/3/2013
awsum story.. :)
friendofamonkey chapter 24 . 4/21/2013
You should know that a Courtesan is not a fancy word for a ward, it means prostitute or mistress.
Kylila Kurosuki chapter 18 . 3/16/2013
nice chapter

good job love

i love it
MaiXXxxXXNaru2014 chapter 22 . 3/13/2013
Thought answers
4 miroku
6 sango
8 rin
1 kagome
2 inuyasha a very cute baka
7 kouga
Isa710 chapter 25 . 2/17/2013
I just read the whole story right now and I LOVED IT! Well anyways keep up the good work :D
Oo InuHanyou oO chapter 24 . 2/17/2013
I absolutely positively loved it :D must make a sequel if you haven't alredy! you're a fantastic writer :D
Oo InuHanyou oO chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
i am loving this story so far :D im just shocked Miroku hasn't been hospitalized yet XD
Guest chapter 6 . 2/4/2013
Guest chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
holy fuck a flying mushroo this shit is funny :) hahahahahahaha. rin is so stupid .
Guest chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
I LIKE THE story but you keep jumping from first person to third person all in the same sentence and it does not sound right . i think you have the potential of a real writer but you still have a few bumps and bruises , but besides that this story is great .work on it
Guest chapter 4 . 2/4/2013
she said that edward cullen was just a sparkley vampire she funny as hell
i like this story TEAM JACOB ALL DAII NIGGAS!
MysteriousCookie chapter 25 . 1/27/2013
Hey, it's me again. I was surprised when I found out Naraku was in the story! I just finished it. Oh, and, how old is Rin in this story, because, she drove the car, and... ya know...

Okay, umm... awesome story. That's how I want to start out. Good literature, spelling, (and I'm not being one of those freakish miss perfect judgeful reviewers that say everything has to be perfect, if you know what I mean.) and everything was interesting! I thought it was a really good story. I mean, first of all, I'm sitting hear eating dry Cheerios in a plastic bag, drinking Gatorade, then eating a bagel, (still drinkin' that Gatorade) and reading rhe story. Whoo! Paradise! LOLZ
Alright, well that's the end of this review! I enjoy reading stories online. I read My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic- Cupcakes. I know this is surprising, (for those of you who've never read Cupcakes before) but that story is GO-ry. No, really. I hate to admit it, but I ENJOYED it. If your looking for a dark, evil, gory story, than I suggest My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic- Cupcakes. You probably don't care about anything I just said. HAVE you read Cupcakes?

Well, awesome story. NOW it's the end of the review. See ya!
MysteriousCookie chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
I LOVE Pocky, too! Oh, and, yes, Inuyasha. You DO love Kagome. That's for chapter 4. Hey, you're a really good writer. Some of the Inuyasha stories weren't my type, but yours is awesome. Enjoyable, like my Dewey book. Kay, well that's all! Chow for now! :D
Inukagfan1 chapter 8 . 1/23/2013
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