Danny is funny when he's sick and crazy talking.

: ) very nice : ) I love how concerned he is about grace, even in his fevered state ; ) Good work!

would love to read more on this. steve caring for his 'brother in arms' danny...nursing him through the flu. gotta be lousy not to have anyone to look after you when you're sick...but danny has his best friend and partner for that!

Love this story. You write sick Danny and comforting Steve, very well.

Aw! This is lovely. I love sick!Danny fretting over Grace, and Steve's gentle compassion. Thanks for a very sweet read.

Nice story, but what about the Catholics? I didn't see any.

Poor Danno!

This was really well written, I laughed out loud at the, 'Flying vermin. Like rats with wings' part! :)

I can totally see Danny saying that...lol. Loved Steve as well, they were both very much in character.

Well done, and thanks for sharing _

I loved it! But I didn't really have to squint. Oh no, no I did not know the pigeons mate for life .~ ooo la la, says the enthusiastic reader! ;D I jest ;], I love the story though! ~Nayah

I love your fiction! It's so sunny and lovely and fun. I really liked this fiction. I'm fine thinking that Steve and Danno and are just friends and partners, but I like the tiny hints that they could be more.

Write more Five-0 fics! And that's an order! :)

I loved it so much! I could take some more. I never get enough of Danny h/c, especially when it is that good! Thanks!

loved it! and i didnt squint too hard ;)

Simply beautifully written. Loved the use of pigeons in this. One of my favorite phrases was: "...Danny says, with the air of patience people usually reserve for very small children and people with developmental delays." because that helps me to 'hear' what Danny is saying. Excellent work.

Nice. I like it

Loved this! I've had a similar story floating around in my mind for a while now, but yours is MUCH better. Thanks for posting it. :)

Excited to see Mousme here - nice hurt/comfort. Go on, give us a plot! Love your writing.