Reviews for WitFit Prompts
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
Love reading about them older! ) ty! MoniNP
avidreader69 chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
I would love a story about these guys as young adults and the peripheral view of what their parents life is like now!
greeneyedgirly chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
Damn, is it bad that I think I'd actually like to see them get caught? LOL! I think I just want to see Bella getting all over them while Edward sits there smirking and proud just like a dad would be. This is very cute, hon!
greeneyedgirly chapter 8 . 6/9/2011
Oh man I'm bummed that you're leaving these two for now! These three prompts were absolutely perfect and I've enjoyed this little E/B tale so, so much! But, I do understand that you don't want to find yourself bogged down with another chaptered story, which is what would happen if you continued writing about them for each and every prompt from here on out. Anyway, I hope you do eventually come back to them, maybe something a little further in the future? Idk, just wishful thinking I guess. :)
Xxx.Promise.To.Love.You.xxX chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
Soo, Seth became a bad boy and ladies man (before Anthony)? Hmm... He'll always be little guy who likes icky animals in my mind though.

I want to hear more about them.
mamacat20 chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
I kept trying to figure out who in the heck Shawn was. Duh on me. I liked seeing these 2 older.
chartwilightmom chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
aw, very nice

wow, congrats on the original fic, will check it out!
coryoplayer chapter 9 . 6/9/2011

Loving it!

AnakinSmom chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
Loved all the kids in HOFY and its nice to get a glimpse of their future.
CynMar Rom chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
I guess that clears up a little :) and is this sussie girl the one that brakes tony's heart? or is it other woman?

Much love!
rms33 chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
I thought it was Seth and Tony?

Thanks this was great.
Jessica1971 chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
I'm guessing Shawn is Seth in the original HOFY?
NKubie chapter 8 . 6/8/2011
I would love to read more of these two, but I also understand your reason for stepping back. That's not why you started with the WitFits so not committing to another multi-chapter story seems like the smart thing to do. But anytime you want to come back to them, I'd love it!
oneiros lykos chapter 8 . 6/8/2011
Thank you giving us more of the story between these two! :)
coryoplayer chapter 8 . 6/8/2011

Just back from a week in LA and catching up on your story!

Just finished 5 chapters and loved each one!

Looking forward to more!

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