Okay, scary thing is... you basically described my friend, except he's a guy. Samori Kuriyama is my friend in fan-fic girl form... 0_o so creeepy! haha anyway, nice chapter! I like that you used Hinata, Temari, and Ten Ten! Keep it up!

:) Ohh, I like it so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice so far! right when I started reading, I started listening to "lover soul" by kou shibasaki and it kind of worked really well with the feel of the story. Haha Keep it up!