Reviews for Daisy
ShinyShiny9 chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
I'm . . . I'm going to cry now. Poor little Wheatley . . . Even if he doesn't remember any of that later on, it's still terrible that he had to go through it. Lovely story!
Keighlyn chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Dude I luv ur stories there epic!plees right more portal fanfics plees!
InsanityCore chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I have literally been sitting here trying to put into words how sad this was for like three minutes. It's just...*breaks down and cries*
CupcakeCarnage chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Holy crap. You just broke my heart. I felt the pieces hit the floor.
ChazzyBaby chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Awwwww that was just adorable! yet so sad ;; u ;;
BabyCharmander chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Ack, I read this like, ages ago, but I forgot to review it. BUT I REMEMBERED NOW.

I normally don't like the "Wheatley was once human" theory but this fic pulled it off so brilliantly that I didn't care. The whole thing was absolutely heartbreaking and both Doug and Wheatley were amazingly in-character. I also love the fact that you used THAT song.

I am a total sucker for H/C, though I think this is one of the first I've seen where the comfort is... really not a happy thing. (I mean, it helped Wheatley, sorta, but...) Really amazing work overall.
The Great Susinko chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
What a wonderful and sad story. Thank you for writing it.
arterstertgre chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
. Oh my GOD. I can't... I can't even properly respond to this... I... i'm just going to curl up and cry now...
Mousewoman chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
The emotion in this was just fantastic. When Wheatley wantwd to go home and didn't know where it was my heart just broke. And Doug singing him to "sleep" to wipe his memory just made it that much better. All in all you got sucked into the story very quickly despite the short lenght and you really did an amazing job with this.
unbadger chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
dfkjhgjdkghkdjf HOW HEARTBREAKING oh my god WHEATLEYYY ;_; Ugh. This is amazing. You are amazing. ALL OF YOUR STORIES ARE AMAZING. Please, never stop writing.
Emmalyn chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Your writing is amazing. Really, it is, I'm not exaggerating. This and your other Portal fics make me laugh and smile and yes, even cry (which is something I don't do often-I'm more likely to hold in a sniffle or two while reading if it's a particularly sad fic). Thanks so much for sharing and writing these. :) I honestly can't wait to read more from you!
Silvara chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I don't have the words...

Or maybe five: Aperture Science is a monster.
Tsutarja-cuteness101 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
wow i haven't even played the game and i'm crying!TTit's so sad...anyways keep up the good work...this really was an awesome prequel...
a fan chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Oh, my, that is so sad! Good job, because I am thoroughly depressed. If only Rattman knew...
anon chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I saw this on the kink meme a while back. It broke my heart. In a good way. I think it's very beautiful and well-written.

Anyways, I think crying is good for a person.
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