Reviews for Mischief and Magic
sand beneath our feet chapter 16 . 5/26
Heh I suck at endings too! Nice story, I'm going to read Loki's view
sand beneath our feet chapter 15 . 5/26
I like it! This story is really fun, I'm finding it surprisingly enjoyable
sand beneath our feet chapter 12 . 5/26
Oh darn but hahhaha
sand beneath our feet chapter 11 . 5/26
Waaaaaaaaah I love it!
Oh yes Loki's point of view you say? Please do!
sand beneath our feet chapter 10 . 5/26
Wow! I like it!
sand beneath our feet chapter 8 . 5/26
Yaaaaaaay ahahaha it's awesome
sand beneath our feet chapter 7 . 5/26
It's pretty good! I wish Loki would talk more, but i realized it's incredibly hard

Good luck...oh wait maybe you've finished this already
sand beneath our feet chapter 6 . 5/26
sand beneath our feet chapter 5 . 5/26
I really like it!
What's OOC...
sand beneath our feet chapter 4 . 5/25
Ehehehehee I like it! This ending was so much better!
sand beneath our feet chapter 3 . 5/25
I really like ur chapters, but then the ending just gets meh
Like it's so good and I'm like, ooooh and then the ending isn't the same so I don't really have the same feels for reviewing
Ah well
It's ok, if a little weird
sand beneath our feet chapter 2 . 5/25
Don't ever be sorry for a cliffhanger!
mariahernandezperez26 chapter 16 . 2/1
Cool story although the ending could have had more pazzaz. But good nonetheless :)
Mushybooma chapter 16 . 6/4/2015
I read all sixteen chapters it was amazing!
Hey chapter 16 . 7/23/2014
I'm quite conflicted... I liked your story, the general plot and idea were great, but the whole story contained a lot of OOC-ness, awkward dialogue and tell-not-show method... Overall, a great attempt, just try to fix the already mentioned things :)))
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