|Reviews for The Ballad of Twilight Sparkle|
| Jess chapter 15 . 3/10
I really loved that! Especially because Rarity got arrested. That was a funny section. I thought it was funny, well written and had an interesting plot line. I like the ships you used as well. Also, was that a g3 joke I spotted at the end?
| Wonderful Wubber chapter 15 . 12/31/2013
I smell Phoenix Wright.
| True Avox chapter 15 . 11/11/2013
I feel like I'm a little late here, but I loved this story so far. It's a shame it has been twenty-one months since you've updated...
I'm left here trying to convince myself that you haven't given up on this story, and that you are actually just writing a really long chapter that is going to be like 100k words. Please? Don't leave us all hangin' bro...
| xXLuna-EternalXx chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
This was probably the best thing I have read in a long time (only hunger games can top this) and I was wondering if you were continuing it any further?
| Brambleclaw your favorite cat chapter 15 . 7/1/2013
Love the story so far bro keep it up
| Tsubasa Tsukino 88 chapter 15 . 5/14/2013
Please update soon!
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/2/2013
You please post more please PLEASE please also I'm thinking derpy dose somthing coool
| Le stupidshark chapter 14 . 1/9/2013
PWEASE DON'T BE DEAD! D:
| Mike Prower the Fox chapter 15 . 11/26/2012
Last updated February 7.
Suffering from Schedule Slip, are we? At this rate, Half Life 3 will be out before you even get the next chapter up! In all honesty, this story is amazing. It's funny, it's cute, and - most importantly - well written. You've no idea how many poorly-written fics I've seen. Wait... yeah, you should. Sturgeon's Law and all that. (Heh. Look at me dropping tropes into my review. I've no shame.)
Anyway, here's hoping you get that update out soon... unless it's already found on FimFiction.
| A fan chapter 15 . 11/13/2012
Please tell me I wasn't the only one that thought that they referenced this story in "The Crystal Empire"? Not only in how Twilight reacted to the library - I kept thinking Trixie should have been there too, to see it - but also in how it looked. (or that might just be me, it just looked a lot like I imagined the library in this story). Awesome!
| Maegash1r4 chapter 15 . 10/27/2012
Just found this story. It's very awesome but ends in a cliffhanger as for now. Then you demand a tvtropes entry. I never visited that site. But I just recognized that you still owe us a ballad which is waaaay more harder to write than anything. If you write an update in the next week, I will promise a trope entry. Damn it, it's not nice to leave us hanging.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
| Fenix of the light chapter 15 . 6/29/2012
You are going to finish this right? I was really enjoying it when I had to stopreadingbecuase there was. No more to read...
| Olive nerd chapter 15 . 6/22/2012
You are amazingly talented; I love how you weaves in your characters with the original characters so smoothly and brought out the romantic pairings' personalities. After all, we'd expect Appledash to be a couple that'd keep you dreamily speechless, huh? And the same goes for the main characters, Trixie and Twilight. I adored how Trixie had kept her smug attitude around the innocently bashful bookworm, and when you least expected it, Twilight's friends would burst through the doors and alter Trixie's state of mind with the aura of friendship. And at the same time, they'd subconsciously lure Twilight into being more confident with her choices.
Personally, one of my favorite parts was when Twilight, Trxie, and Dash were doomed to face the contract and each other. I found it utterly hilarious how Dash was parading around in AJ's hat and keeping her cool around the stony faced business ponies. And at the same time, Twilight was pitifully embarrassed to the point where you just had to laugh!
I also loved the part when Rarity gets arrested for strolling around with the Crusader's weapons. Oh the irony of it all! And also, the last part with Trxie trying to increase Twilight's blushing habits with her tail and teleporting acts was cherishibly awesome!
Basically, this story rocks, and you should continue writing it. I'm not surprised at all when seeing the many reviews you've already received.
But to top it all off, I think that many of them agree when I proclaim that this story is so inspiring that if the original show wasn't for young girls, they'd use this idea in a heartbeat. I understand that there would be critism with some of the obviously personal elements, such as the pairings. However, I'm sure that you'd get many views anyway from such a remarkable plot. Hey, I'm heterosexual and think this is phenomenal! In short, please continue writing this well planned tale!