Reviews for I'm Not Your Father, Bella
edwardian1901 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Hammy! I didn't know you had written this. Honestly, I happened across it last night. I like it! I think you've got a more-than-interesting idea here. Good dialogue. I like the care you took to make Edward's and Bella's voices different. My humble opinion (you ready?): you ought to make something more of this; it could be further developed, with a plot wrapped around it (you've already got the beginnings of a story). Of course, you would need the right muse, and time, and desire, and all of that. But I wanted you to know that I like it, and if you wanted an ear to bounce ideas off of, I'm available. -E.
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
I really liked this

great one shot

Edward has some valid points about addressing the dangerous stuff she got into while edward was away

i loved the ending it was so cute!
la chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
you can read fics of 'the sound and the fury'and 'kardia'
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
And who would be spanking who I wonder?