Reviews for Ben 10
annea101 chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
actually ghostfreaks planet is Anur Phaetos
Albert J. MacMashiere chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
Dude, can't you come up with some actual alien names? Why the frip would the aliens have names that are words in earth language? I can think of better alien names off the spot! fourarms-Mrainden, XLR8-Swivich, greymatter-Gryolve, stinkfly-Plyk'Xiv, wildmutt-Snarigg, upgrade-GM(galvanic mechamorph model)46779847811, heatblast-Blizrakge, ripjaws-kroi, ghostfreak-zhagisk. There, much better alien names! At least they're alien (not of human language) names.
Zak Saturday chapter 4 . 6/5/2011
! Poor Rakki!
FireShot chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
nice but too short, I liked the idea and the start but I think you need to put some more effort on the ending. sorry about the drawback, I'm just trying to help.