I hope this frelling story somehow comes back to life someday. I'd love to see John try to explain the whole alternate realty mess to everyone lol.

You should really add more to this story; It has a lot of potential. If you would like a starting point, Try the origin of the Shadows or The Vorlons. I have read a lot of B 5 stories, but I have yet to come across an origin of these 2 races. If you would like, please consider it a challenge...

Great work. Why have you stopped?

what an amazing story so far let's see what the telepaths will uncover about all of this, can hardly wait for the next chapters.

This had an interesting premise, decent storytelling and grammar but the sheer incompetence of Earth Alliance and the Minbari is just off putting. You basically nerfed the Minbari and Earth, they had thousands of ships not hundreds, and the level of fighting from Earth is lackluster at best and a disgrace at worst. These are the same people who held off the Minbari with tooth and nail, losing one colony and suddenly they are suing for peace, they held against the Minbari for a lot longer than that, they fought until only Earth was left, and then they fought some more! And the peacetalks a sensible Clark, no way in any dimension would the Earth Alliance or the Minbari accept a peacetalk after they had been attacked unprovoked several times by the Scarrans, they are not that stupid or ignorant or blasé of the millions dead but yes its all misunderstanding,carry on. This story is full of idiotic convient plotpoints for the sake of driving some contrived narrative.

Well Written; PLEASE CONTINUE...

A real pity you don't have enough respect for your readers to actually finish your frelling story. Sigh

It had turned into confusing jumble of universes.

So, in this universe (thanks to the Guardian of Forever), Jankowski and the Minbari never got into that tragic misunderstanding of a first contact? In the words of Mr. Spock: "Fascinating!"

Awesome story
Hope it continues; want to see John's reaction upon seeing Earth Force.

to bad you never finished the story it was very good.

It is really very sad that this interesting Fic has died and will not continue to be updated anymore.

I really should know better than to read these unfinished and long un-updated stories, because I get pulled into the story, and then left hanging without the likelihood of anything being updated. :( Still, it was nice while it lasted.

Hah, Dukhat spitting hot fiah!

I liked this chapter.

I totally dig hax dukhat and not frothing at the mouth staleek.

I always saw dukhat as just a dead spacepope, but this guy is cool!