Reviews for Three Wise Monkeys
PADavis chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
Loved it - what a great concept and what a great story. Twilight douchebags - of course! Everything I love about your fics was right here in spades. Characterization, dialog, plot - yum.

supernaturalsammy67 chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
AW love, this was bloody awesome! I LOVE THIS! :) ACE!

JUST ace hun :)
Maz101 chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
Nice story! Unusual. Great work on all the witchy detail and convoluted interplay of witches and gypsies. And the Winchester/Bobby dialogue.

Congrats for getting it out there with RL pressures. Thanks.
skag trendy chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
Oh I liked this very much! Plenty of Winchester AND Singer snark - always a delight. Excellent case which kept me enthralled all the way through. And, of course, brotherly care and love.

Thanks for sharing hon. I needed cheering up. And it was great to find something to read that didnt have season 6 spoilers.

Kind regards,

ST Xxx
TraSan chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
This was made of so much awesomeness! Loved the whole thing, girl. Original, expertly characterized, and some mutual bro-whumpage (with Bobby thrown in for good measure). Just wonderful.
Madebyme chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
What a joy this was! Action, sharp humour and h/c, what more could I ask for?

You really tied up loose ends nicely and I was fascinated by all the witchery and spells but then again I've always been a bit partial to witch fics. I'm pleased that we got to see Magda again but was saddened by her fate, even though she saw it coming in the previous chapter I was kind of hoping she'd make it - she was pretty awesome!

You worked in the mirrored buttons well, sliding it in effortlessly and the imagery of the trio ageing was vivid and spellbinding. I don't how you managed to swap POV's so effortlessly throughout, but you did and kept up the speedy pace and tension.

The humour really stood out for me; 'Serena the teenage witch' and 'Dean's doll' were highlights but as always you really captured Dean's biting and sarcastic humour perfectly.

But of course it was all the brotherly moments that I treasured most; Sam being Dean's eyes at the beginning and Dean being Sam's ears, you really hit the nail on the head with those sections. And poor Sam's leg – you really like to punish him there, huh?

All in all this was a total hit and I thoroughly enjoyed every word! Thanks so much for sharing and for posting both chapters together, I really appreciated that. Take care and I'll no doubt catch you again soon, Abbi
Linnie McCary chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Nice job, you! What a great writing challenge-to spotlight each of the men's infirmities so the reader never forgets that character's situation, shifting POVs frequently and still moving the story forward. You certainly pulled it off. And I'm glad you left Dean's snark intact throughout! :D
Madebyme chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
What a thrilling opening chapter! Great premise, complex and rich storyline mixed with some awesome banter and brotherly bonding - you sure know how to entertain us readers!

While the title clued me in, I loved how you eased the readers into the curse; Sam struggling to hear but blaming blood in his ears and back ground noises and Dean with his eye injury.

What really stuck out for me was how you initially had Sam and Dean communicate without Bobby as the go-between, cluing the other in; a mixture of hand gestures, lip reading and simple intuition. Their bond and relationship really shone through and I don't know how you figured out how to dish out each individual curse but it works really well.

I also loved the little things too; Sam getting the voice activated software and Dean's short fuse while trying to use it and the worry and fear that Bobby picks up from both brothers about their siblings. Yummy.

Magda was a treasure too. I liked her conviction and she had such a lasting impression given how little we saw of her. I'm certainly looking forward to more and hopefully, time allowing, I'll be able to finish this today. If you didn't guess already, I'm in heaven, this is thoroughly engaging! Take care, Abbi
Medusa -the writer chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
I really enjoyed this story. Love the way you wove it all together so they were all dependant on each other. Well done, very entertaining.
pandora jazz chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Wonderful story.

I could picture this plot being used on an episode. I like how well Dean, Sam and Bobby worked together to break the spell.

I never guessed that Magda was a spirit when the brothers and Bobby met her. That was a nice twist.

Just the right amount of hurt, tense moments and a wonderful ending. I also like how the brothers asked Castiel for some help, but at the end, Sam wanted to heal on his own.

I enjoyed reading your story.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
SimplyOut chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Nice one :)
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
LOL The ending was so cool! eehhehe

I really liked the story! ) Great plot, the story is not too long... Real good! DD

Kisses ~

CeCe Away chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
That was an interesting plot. I liked how Magda's ghost tried to help how she could.
Catsluver chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
I enjoyed this story. I liked the concept of the three being dependent on each other. Hear no evil. See no evil. Speak no evil. Good idea. The characters were well written. Very true to the show. Good writing.
Colby's girl chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Loved the story. Glad to hear from you.
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