Reviews for Out of the Shadows
Shinethedown chapter 11 . 10/28/2011
Very good chapter and very good fic. Very unique and intersting to read, the only advice I can give is don't make them to powerful/hax to quick, or have the other genin teams recieved a little power up like team 10?

Hope you can update soon
Prodigy Of War chapter 11 . 10/25/2011
I just wanted to say FINALLY SOMEONE FIGURED IT OUT! People have been making shikamaru suck, time after time after time, when he has the greatest potential, imo. I'm so happy you put in the fact he can't make people suddenly make weapons appear out of thin air, or make weapons disappear in the blink of an eye. Though to be honest, I never thought about using other peoples weapons against them. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I eagerly await the next chapter.
Kimiz chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
It's three in the morning, so I'll stop here. Tomorrow I'll continue. Just wanted you to know that I'm loving the story so far, I love Team 10, and you managed to capture them in a way that was endearing and at the same time in-character. I was sooo proud after seeing them being all badass in Shippuuden xD Oh, I don't know if anybody told you yet, but just in case they haven't, Shikamaru's mom's name is Yoshino. She's awesome, I love his parents xD Looking forward to the rest!
Gulanticus chapter 11 . 10/23/2011
Neji vs Rock Lee! Out of all the matches, I think this is the one that you have to give your all too. The rivalry is too deep not too. Great posting and enjoyable fight between two of the lesser used chuunin. There is enough here to separate this story from another one posted by ANBU Dave: Kageme Complete - I think that's the story.

Other than that, I wish your chapters were longer, but I will be patient while this story plays out.
Birdman chapter 10 . 10/20/2011
Cool story bro. Really liking this story the characters are well thought out with their own personalities and there development is believable. Looking forward to the next chapter.
SomeFlemishGuy chapter 10 . 10/9/2011
Loved the nex chapter! I can't wait to see what'll happen between Shikamaru and Gaara.
WinglessCrows chapter 10 . 10/8/2011
Yes! I have been waiting for so lang and when you finally update, it is an good, long, fantastic chapter. Love, love, love! I really hope you keep up the good work, cause I can't live without this story. Ifyou find all the positive words in this world, and put them all together, that would be how, I would describe your story. Amazing! Keep on writing this Awesom story.

Thanks for InoShikaCho Chronicles!
Gulanticus chapter 10 . 10/7/2011
I'm imagining Ino sliding under the kunochi's punch on her knees - hair just grazing the forest floor. What a beautiful sight! What can I say - I'm a guy!

Thanks for sharing
hackneyqueenextreme chapter 9 . 9/30/2011
I'm really enjoying this story. The perspective chosen is unique and a real breath of fresh air. The non-cannon changes have made the character growth very didsinct while still falling under the believable category. The emotional segments well balance the changes in the mindset of the main characters. I have especially liked how you have fleshed out characters that the origoinal cannon left fairly static. Your interactions among charaters have held fairly true to the basis presented in the canon but the phycological examination of the why's have helped the reader to have a greater understanding of the pressures of living the presented existance. My favorite portion though has to be the fact that Team 10 has grown to be such a strong team. The canon gave them potential but it never quite clicked. In your story, that potential has been explored without moving to the extreme side where they are so tough they could beat anyone without batting an eye. I can not wait to see where you will take this story next!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 9 . 9/3/2011
Rileyyy chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
you have no idea how happy i am that you updated! Shikamaru is up there with Itachi on my list of favortie characters and i think you're doing him justice ). i've been dying for an update, and here it is. so thank you! and please update as soon as you can )
Miroku Kensei chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
Wow. I am enthralled with the direction you are going with both team 10 and the story as a whole.
WinglessCrows chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
I have been waiting so long for an update and i can't say anything besides this: It was worth waiting for. I personally love team 10, Shika is also my fave, so this was exactly what I like in , thank you so much for this chappie.
Gulanticus chapter 9 . 8/30/2011
hehehe I like it! I do not think this was too sappy. I expect partents to make speeches before a big event. I think that you should have written in Naruto's speech. Together with what Shikamaru pulled, I think the speech would have been perfect.
Osamura chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I really enjoyed this story. I've always been fond of team 10, so this story is a real treat.

It did have a slow start but the excellent characterization still made it enjoyable. I think I like your with Ino the most. You actually make her a rather likable and interesting character, which I don't think she always comes off as in the manga/anime, and she's stronger too. Your genin Ino may already be stronger than chunin Ino currently in the manga, and that's awesome.

I can't wait to see what this new, stronger team 10 does in chunin exams. Update soon!
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