Reviews for Out of the Shadows
Crown of Shadows chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
I thought there would've been more of an obstacle for the team during this stage in the exam. They finished the first test first and now there done this first as well. Since they had an extra scroll I thought they would run into one of the other teams at least.

Having said that the fights were well written and it was good to see Ino have her moment to shine and prove herself.

Ino learning telepathy this early is really effective and has certainly paid off during the exams. With a tactical genius like Shikamaru on their team and him not having to say out loud his plans really makes this team more of a force.
Crown of Shadows chapter 6 . 7/23/2012
Great chapter. I can see how there will be changes between all members of Team 10.
Shikamaru especially since he has always been able to think so many moves ahead and it was his falling asleep on the job that nearly cost his friends their lives.
Crown of Shadows chapter 5 . 7/23/2012
Can't wait to see whats happens on their first real misson.
Of course Choji would be the one to get through to Toshiyo.
ShikaXXXTema chapter 12 . 7/20/2012
1 thing i knew before reading things Gaara was a maniac. 1 thing i didn't know was that Shikamaru was a killer. He is so badass. I love you bro this has to be thee best story i have ever read on fanfiction. Continue please, I'm begging you. You are awesome.
ShikaXXXTema chapter 8 . 7/19/2012
I know im annoyin but heres 3 words about this: Shikamaru, fire, SEEXXXYY.
ShikaXXXTema chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
OMG you have i mean HAVE to be the best fanfic writer i have ever experienced you ar so detailed and u keep me wantin more continue writing plz mostly about shikamaru hehehe
Crown of Shadows chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
Really like what your doing with team ten. Their first test and their subsequent methods of training are original and it's nice to just not see a retread of what Kakashi did with his team in the manga.

Team 10 has always been the most balanced and its great to see them come together and grow from when they first met to now.

You really understand the members of team 10, even secondary characters like their parents.
ShikaXXXTema chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
You have goood skills you should continue to write stories. your story is interesting and i cant wait to finish
Crown of Shadows chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Good opening chapter. Nice to see all the members of team 10 getting the spotlight. Especially Ino, a character I never really cared for in the manga but in here she likable and believable and hopefully that continues in furthers chapters.
Nixieneo chapter 22 . 7/12/2012
This story deserves more love. Honestly. Team 10 is one of my favorite teams, due in no small part to the awesomeness that is Shikamaru. I would've wanted more Sand Sibling time, but I guess there's plenty of room for that in the sequel. In any case, great job! This one's going to my favorites. :)
TheInsanityItself chapter 22 . 7/1/2012
I really can't wait for more, I have read this three times and just love how well it is written. 3 So sequel please?
zmanjz chapter 22 . 6/26/2012
Very good story, excellent characterization. It is extremely interesting to see that Naruto remained the nexus-character, but team 10's improvement brings up everyone, and allows for opportunities for others. Kabuto is dead because Jiraya killed him, but it was Shika's actions that were responsible for getting him in place. Likewise Hiruzen lives as an advisor to tsunade due to the same. Neji seems to be improving at the cannon rate, but Hinata is improving drastically.

I think one of my favorite moments was when Shika realized that he could depend on Naruto and Hinata.
5ectumsempra chapter 22 . 6/25/2012
That was such a great story, well done I really loved it! I actually preferred the first half of the story when you were free to choose your own direction, before you were restricted by the chuunin exam and retrieval arc from cannon. I’ll definitely keep my eyes open for the sequel.
hey chapter 12 . 6/24/2012
I'm reading this story as well as Rise of the Uchiha, so I found it hilarious when, after Temari beat Tenten, you accidentally referred to the Rookie 9 as the Konoha orphans. By the way, please update Rise of the Uchiha.
The Forgotten's Kanvas chapter 22 . 6/12/2012
You did an awesome job. The end battle was simply brilliant.
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