|Reviews for Locus|
| ghackethal chapter 12 . 1/25
I loved it
| Abbey Whitlock chapter 12 . 12/14/2017
This was fantastic. I only wish there was more. Great Job!
| Abbey Whitlock chapter 11 . 12/14/2017
First, I love this. Second, I was really hoping Joshua would be able to reveal himself to Dumbles before the kiss. I do love it when Harry gets to rub his deception in Dumbles face.
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 12 . 8/29/2017
That was great.
| Kielyn chapter 12 . 10/1/2016
Amazing story. The summary doesn't do justice to the storyline much and I nearly didn't read it, but I'm so glad it did.
| marybeth.hp7 chapter 12 . 8/4/2016
| Lilingppg007 chapter 12 . 2/28/2016
Finally, a story that actually uses the Felix felicis. I've been wondering why they don't just take the option when going to war etc. Thanks for writing this!
| NemesisNecrosis chapter 12 . 10/6/2015
Their relationship is pretty damn codependent, especially on Joshua's end, though I gather Tom is just as bad, just more subtle. More along the lines of Joshua stabilizing Tom. - chapter 5/6 (And then Tom became more attached in the way Joshua is after his rebirth - some kind of reaction to Joshua's blood?)
You're quite good at using euphemisms when describing sex. - chapter 9
Also of note - I find the idea of all other Hallows besides Yuki's being unable to grant mastery of death amusing when reading your earlier works. Then again, it's not as if Joshua gained the service of the entity Death, so it still works. I suppose any other Harrys with a Death at their command must be from a different branch of universes or something. - 10
Huh, apparently I have actually read this one, I just forgot. Probably due to all the other fanfiction I've read recently... Anyway, maybe now I'll be able to get some sleep.
| floatingF chapter 7 . 9/25/2015
Your re-interpretation of prophecy is really awesome! *giving a standing ovation* It's absolutely creative and genius. And your writing style is so cool. It's almost like as cool as Tarantino's movie. I'm not finished story fully yet but I really want to thank you for sharing this awesome story. You're so brilliant.
| Elizabeth Lilian chapter 12 . 5/7/2015
This has to be one of my favorite fanfiction. It is brilliant.
| Leya Anhaylla chapter 12 . 12/21/2014
Awesome story really!
| Hainbuche chapter 12 . 12/5/2014
eine ziemlich blutige irgendwo aber gut geschrieben. nett zu lesen. lg hayne
| occasionallywrite chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
Amazing story! Absolutely love your writing.
| Mumia0813 chapter 12 . 11/6/2014
Lovely I would take up a sequal of this but I currently don't have a computer nor tablet. But if I pm u think u could send me ur notes I can print them off from the library. I like stories like this where the author would let the fellow readers try a hand at making a sequal ( with express permission) just thought I review n congratulate u on the mushy stuff it was perfect I mean kept them in character one cold n possessively insane n the other sane n loving then later, two main characters switch roles, tom becoming sane n clear headed (still possessive) n lovingly while harry/Joshua has episode bouts of insanity lol but heavily devoted n in love with his tom.
Masterfully done I applaud you n your creative mind.
P.s. I'm serious in giving out praises at most I just read like/fav stories other times I give praises like this one n that shows how much I'd enjoyed the read. So again thanks.
| LurkerAlert chapter 12 . 10/27/2014
Another brilliantly written story featuring my favorite pairing! Thoroughly enjoyed re-reading it. 3