|Reviews for Locus|
| JIMIRMA chapter 12 . 2/2
Great darkish and the fact that Dumblebeee is a bad wizard bad fits in well with the original Harry Potter story,the way Dumbles used the book to make more Muggle-born and kill his is a manipulative,not so grandfatherly,ambitious,over confident deviant, it's always nice to find someone who sees really all those times things went wrong cant be claimed on simply not knowing it,because even when he knew something was wrong and he had the power to change it,in Harry Potter books he did nothing.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/25
this is just so freaking fantastic
i absolutely love this
it's very different from the usual fanfictions about harry and voldemort growing up and ruling together
and i really, really love it
the language is truly exceptional, and it's absolutely fantastic
i also love how you included the smutty scenes but not in a very erotic manner, just sort of mentioned them
| JlovesGaara chapter 12 . 1/23
Wow what an amazing story. Time travel, love, and a sane Voldemort. It was cool to see how Tom became the person he was over the years. Wonderful work, keep it up :)
| ayumi9273 chapter 12 . 12/13/2013
Somehow I've had it in my Favorites for quite a while without ever getting around to read it and now that I did, I know that it's been well deserved the whole time! :)
| SlytherinSoul14 chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
| 64teeth chapter 12 . 11/14/2013
wow, great story! and so atypical even if some ideas are very often used be fanfiction writers :D
| FalconLux chapter 6 . 9/28/2013
Awww... I'm so sad for poor Tom. Going crazy without his Joshua to keep him in check. I'm a little sorry for Harry too, having to go through, what? ten years at Hogwarts? Only three with Tom, but ALL with Dumbledore...
| FalconLux chapter 5 . 9/28/2013
Wow. This is so interesting. I love it. I can't wait to find out when, where, and how he's going to end up back in the future.
| FalconLux chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
Hmmm... Still very interesting. I love how you keep me guessing.
| FalconLux chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
Another awesome chapter. I'm loving semi-corporeal Tom, but I'm wondering if Voldemort is going to be brought around or destroyed...
| FalconLux chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Omigosh! I love this! An utterly fascinating take on the idea of Harry goes back to the '40s and befriending Tom.
| Pyrane chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
Very interesting story :D
Well done !
| Balos chapter 12 . 8/22/2013
Great job! I like how Harry doesn't become 100% evil nor Tom 100% good. I like the happy ending. Thank you so much for writing this.
| sympatheticassassin chapter 8 . 5/3/2013
Thanks for writing. This is a different approach to the time travel that I hadn't seen before.
| DeanneGray chapter 12 . 4/23/2013
Great story! Would love to read/write a sequel to this, but I doubt anybody could capture the same character that you have given Tom & Joshua. Loved the story, and thought it was very original and creative. Thank you for writing