|Reviews for Locus|
| Leya Anhaylla chapter 12 . 12/21/2014
Awesome story really!
| Hainbuche chapter 12 . 12/5/2014
eine ziemlich blutige irgendwo aber gut geschrieben. nett zu lesen. lg hayne
| readingaccount chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
Amazing story! Absolutely love your writing.
| chewmika chapter 12 . 11/6/2014
Lovely I would take up a sequal of this but I currently don't have a computer nor tablet. But if I pm u think u could send me ur notes I can print them off from the library. I like stories like this where the author would let the fellow readers try a hand at making a sequal ( with express permission) just thought I review n congratulate u on the mushy stuff it was perfect I mean kept them in character one cold n possessively insane n the other sane n loving then later, two main characters switch roles, tom becoming sane n clear headed (still possessive) n lovingly while harry/Joshua has episode bouts of insanity lol but heavily devoted n in love with his tom.
Masterfully done I applaud you n your creative mind.
P.s. I'm serious in giving out praises at most I just read like/fav stories other times I give praises like this one n that shows how much I'd enjoyed the read. So again thanks.
| LurkerAlert chapter 12 . 10/27/2014
Another brilliantly written story featuring my favorite pairing! Thoroughly enjoyed re-reading it. 3
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/26/2014
| HaruHarry chapter 12 . 10/26/2014
A very damn good story
| loretta537 chapter 12 . 10/17/2014
this is an interesting story, I hope you write a sequel some day
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
THIS and 'One Winged Angel' are some of the BEST V/H ficcies on the net. :) Thank you for writing these MASTERPIECES.
| SupernaturalRomanceIStheBest99 chapter 12 . 7/11/2014
I usually hate time travel fics, but I made an exception for this one and I am extremely happy I did!
| skaredysincat chapter 12 . 7/2/2014
I love this, but it confused me a lot, i don't really understand what was happening with joshua but it ws really good, and you're an amazing writer 3 xxx
| GreenDrkness chapter 12 . 6/29/2014
This story was kinda complicated but I do love your liberal use of time travel
Keep on the writes
| Chim Cheree chapter 11 . 6/8/2014
now you said it yourself, Harry's murder was in fact an act of mercy. So technically his horcrucx shouldn't work. It has to be an act of evil, murder in cold blood without remorse. That's obviously not the case.
| Chim Cheree chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
I'm not sure if freeing a terminally ill child counts as murder in cold blood...
| Chim Cheree chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Very nice idea, I hope the chapters will stay as interesting as the first one :)
Only your grammar could use a beta reader, especially concerning the structure of your sentences.