Reviews for Riding the Road for Redemption
tedthelionhead chapter 10 . 1/5/2013
Awesome! I've read the whole fanfic in one night great job btw! Is there going to be a sequel of some sorts or more chapters? If so, great! I loved reading this story, thank you so much
MidoriKiwi chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
I seriously feel so bad for Hikari in this story :-( in so emotional that I didn't want to read this story at first. The story is really good though. LOL AT HIKARI'S BANK MESSAGE. I wonder how Shinji will act. I just feel ao bad for Hijari though T_T
Mrs.Freak93 chapter 10 . 12/30/2011
What a chapter. I rejoiced at this alert because i really like the story. i was very surprised how ruthless Dawn can be, but I like how she act. I'm waiting eagerly for the nexr chapter. :)
Mrs.Freak93 chapter 10 . 12/30/2011
What a chapter. I rejoiced at this alert because i really like the story. i was very surprised how ruthless Dawn can be, but I like how she act. I'm waiting eagerly for the nexr chapter. :)
mednin chapter 10 . 12/18/2011
Haha nice.
StrawberryPeaches chapter 10 . 12/12/2011
Just started reading this today and woah im strucked by it's awesomeness. I'm loving how it's not your normal "Dawn and Paul see each other again, fight then fall in love with lots of romance in between". This has lots of drama and i like how they aren't officially together "yet?". Love how Dawn hasn't completely fallen for paul and making it hard for him to keep her "sane for his company". Dawn has proved to be a total awesome badass bitch! with her whole "Fuck you Paul". I so hope she gets away from him only to see his reactions and wether or not he's gonna try find her. I guess it depends on if he only used her, lusts her, or truly loves her. HMMM?...
Chibitiza chapter 10 . 12/5/2011
Holy...

I did not see this coming Laura, you pulled an excellent plot twist on me. I squeal with joy from the drama that just happened. Dawn quitting? *gasp* continue with the angsty drama of making your next wonderful chapter while punishing us by making us wait.

What devestating chain reaction will Dawn create by quitting?

I can see the plot of the next chapter...D

Dawn goes on the run to a faraway place, Shinji's company suffers greatly from the disappearance of Dawn, the paparazzi going on a field day by questioning Paul and people going on a manhunt for Dawn, the plot twist of Dawn getting mugged with the money stolen and then 1. (the paparazzi having their field day reward and ruining Dawn's reputation again) or 2. (Paul finding Dawn and having a confrontation leading to relieving tension with smexy romance (to which Paul denies) followed by the drama of either getting the money back or Dawn unwillingly rebuilding Paul and her reputation and status.) 0_O whoa...

Sorry Laura! Did I say too much?

If so, I'm reaaaally sorry! I'm just genre savvy on what just happened! Kill me or delete this comment if you have to!
sjir-sama chapter 10 . 12/5/2011
lol shinji is going to be soo pissed..

so wanna read about the reaction p

I even prefer a chapter of this then an utopian unova now o

sjir.
givemethequietlife chapter 10 . 12/4/2011
Good job with this chapter! Nice message for Dawn to leave Paul. Wonder what his reaction will be...
Chibitiza chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
*gasp* this chapter is getting so good...

the photoshoot was so steamy...

make MOAR!

I"m loving this story better than the other dawnxshinji fanfic. (hate to say it, its AUUN)

its flawless plot-wise so I'm ignoring the miniscule typos.
Sjir-sama chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
wouldn't it be a cool twist if dawn got succesfull adn all and paul's company went out of business p.
Mrs.Freak93 chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
I've just read your story and .. WOW !

Your style of writing is just great !

You described everyting so clearly, I could imagine every single scene of this story.

I really love it and I'm looking forward to read a new chapter.

:)
writlings chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
He ate toothpaste? XD

" "The shithead broke my damn toilet and insisted that I eat his gourmet banana meal. I can't deal with that imbecile." " ROFL!

If he did push her away earlier in the story coz of paparazzi, then why is he advertising her now? O_O

Sorry, don't have time for my standard sized reviews...but great chapter~! _
RaveOn-Goodbye chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
they got together. is Paul going tell Dawn about how long he liked her

how is this going to effect Paul in the public eye
writlings chapter 8 . 9/12/2011
YAYAYAY! I'm sooooooo happy you updated both! _

Yay! It so nice to see her happy!

OMG! Brock's marrying CYNTHIA? *jawdrop*

*picks it up* Gah, Kenny's mean. :/

Ooooooh... Twinleaf moment! XD

Yay for Paul interruption! Awesomeness! *_*

"I want you, Dawn." OMG! YAYAYAYAYAYAY! Ikarishipping FTW! XD But stillllll...come ON Paul! Don't just play around with her! You better not hurt her...AGAIN! XDDDDDD

Uh oh... what happened? :O

Awesome chapter!
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