Reviews for First Try
Uzumaki Shougunate chapter 6 . 9/5
Plz update this or rewrite it. This is one of the best Naruto Fic’s out there.
Heart chapter 13 . 7/22
Interesting. Possibilities and we can choose...ooooooh~ :D Thank you very much! :D
Heart chapter 12 . 7/22
*slow clap*
Heart chapter 11 . 7/22
Booyah. Oh dear... sensei is sensei
Heart chapter 10 . 7/22
Road to recovery indeed. It was interesting to see these POVs and learn some more. Also, SERIOUSLY INO?! YOU DITZ?! Ugh.
Heart chapter 9 . 7/22
Those dear kids... At least the sensei snapped out of it and came to an...odd vow. Not to teach him but watch him. Yeah. land mine. Oh huns... Soooo they didn't turn him in? Good. Very good. Ha! Close...but... Suna, you say? :)
Heart chapter 8 . 7/22
*aaaaaaaaah*
Heart chapter 7 . 7/22
Cuteee...AAAH! CRUD
Heart chapter 6 . 7/22
Ha! Dummy Obito. Hmmmm. Yay Haku got out alright~ for now~ yaaaay~ Kiri Jonin? Ha! Little Thief! Aaaaah how tables have been flipped. KABUTO?
Heart chapter 5 . 7/22
*shudder* that timeline. Hi Haku. Hi Chunin Exams. Hi Suzume and Satoshi teammate friendos! :D Yikes Kiri. ...
Heart chapter 4 . 7/22
Mama Bear Tetsuo. I wonder...
Heart chapter 3 . 7/22
Tersuo-sensei is seeing the liiiiiiight! :D hehehe! :D Really 'Suke? Reeeaaaally? Oy. I'm curious about the two genin. I like 'em. :)
Heart chapter 2 . 7/22
Well at least the kids seem nice, and he seems inclined to train Naruto...
Heart chapter 1 . 7/22
Awesome, dattebayo! :D Who...? Mizuki?
Katt chapter 13 . 6/27
You're a stinking liar by claiming you already have the story finished, and then you decided to go full retard by graduating Naruto early but still having him ending up with Team 7. Genius!
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