Reviews for First Try
Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 13 . 2/1
Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 2 . 2/1
Awesome as hell
Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 1 . 2/1
Guest chapter 13 . 1/9
Lol I clicked post by mistake,
Anyways I really enjoy this AU! I love Naruto that isn't so blindly Into Sakura, like I try to like her but how she act with Naruto and Sasuke it's makes it's impossible like WHY, and how did u graduated as best chick
Guest chapter 12 . 1/9
I know it's not going to
Guest chapter 5 . 1/9
Naruto is really toned down here :0
Guest chapter 4 . 1/9
Well that escalated quickly :0
Guest chapter 3 . 1/9
Poor Naruto xc
And can't wait for Sasuke reaction when he finds out the truth
Guest chapter 2 . 1/9
I'm little confused with all those family relationship but still interested XD
Your OC aren't annoying or overwhelming, that's good start, I'm actually curious about them and how their's relationship with Naruto will form
MattKennedy chapter 12 . 12/8/2015
Great story! Love how Naruto pranks the Hokage and thus finds Mizuki. :D
Nobody Smurf chapter 2 . 12/8/2015
I'm almost afraid to know what people have tried feeding the kit over the years.

Pissing of Danzo is a public service.
Nobody Smurf chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
Mizuki is allergic to peanuts?
jon reeve chapter 13 . 10/20/2015
I likeded it. On to the next!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/19/2015
The story had been going so well until the team seven crap obviously you agree seeing as you stopped writing
FractalRain chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Nice. I like the way you show ripple effects from even the smallest actions. However, generally most Naruto fics have Naruto fall into a more advanced version of his Shippuden mode (toad summoning, rasengan as priorities with a touch of sealing for flavor). I hope the sequel to this does include some variation in Naruto's skills considering he has a different instructor. Out of all the fics of this type I have read, you have the est chance of doing it believably and well.
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