Reviews for First Try
Laialy chapter 4 . 8/1
That was both a weird and funny chapter...LOVE IT
S-Lioness chapter 13 . 7/27
Kinda confusing, would have been better if all story part were in one place
Guest chapter 12 . 6/26
Naruto is far better than either Sasuke or Sakura right now. I hope they shape up soon...excellent chapter as always! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 6/26
I'm glad Naruto finally knows about the Kyuubi. Great chapter as always! :)
Guest chapter 10 . 6/26
Wonderful chapter! :)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/26
I know why Morishita is blaming Naruto but I can't help but feel angry at her. Naruto brought back her team, even though most of them didn't make it. And he managed to save one of her genin. He doesn't deserve this from her...
Guest chapter 8 . 6/26
Great chapter!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/26
That was smart of Naruto during the First Stage. :) And oh. This isn't good, and I just hope his teammates don't ostracize him for this...
Guest chapter 6 . 6/26
So Tobi is Obito in this universe? Interesting...awesome job with the chapter! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 6/26
Amazing Chapter! :)
Guest chapter 4 . 6/26
Poor Naruto. I feel so sad that he was trying so hard to impress Tetsuo and he ended up not getting that...
Guest chapter 3 . 6/26
Lovely chapter! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26
...I hope Tetsuo won't think so poorly of Naruto during the entire fic. Awesome chapter! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
Awesome chapter! :)
Maximum Over-Saiyan chapter 13 . 6/12
A pretty neat and very enjoyable story. Definitely like the concept of Naruto graduating early via some stroke of luck.
I do sorta wish you put a bit more focus on Naruto's time with Team 5. I don't really feel like I know Satoshi, Suzume, or Tetsuo. Though given the number of sequels, spin-offs, and what-ifs, I suppose that this is supposed to be more of a prologue.

Either way, still a darn good story.
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