Reviews for First Try
animecutylover chapter 11 . 6/29/2019
Awww... Tetsuo's jealous~

Kakashi taking his student from him, lol.
animecutylover chapter 10 . 6/29/2019
Omg. Yass! Bitchy Sakura is annoying. I'm glad that Naruto stopped that though.
animecutylover chapter 9 . 6/29/2019
Yikes. They seriously think that his own father would take someone else's kid before his own into being the vessel for the Kyuubi?
animecutylover chapter 8 . 6/29/2019
Woah. Naruto can leave almost no tracks? That's pretty cool.
animecutylover chapter 7 . 6/29/2019
Yikes. Iwa genin sure are brutal to even consider killing instead of trapping.
animecutylover chapter 6 . 6/29/2019
Of course Obito would have read it too and failed, unlike Naruto, who’s a genius at traps. Lol.
animecutylover chapter 5 . 6/29/2019
Yikes. Kiri really is different from Konoha.
animecutylover chapter 4 . 6/29/2019
Poor Kakashi. He didn’t really think things through huh?
animecutylover chapter 3 . 6/29/2019
They’re the idiots if they think Naruto is pretending.
animecutylover chapter 2 . 6/29/2019
An OC teacher huh?
animecutylover chapter 1 . 6/29/2019
Guest chapter 12 . 5/29/2019
You fucking retarded mother fucking bastard go fucking kill your self and take this piece of shit with you
Anonymous Person chapter 2 . 5/20/2019
At a minimum this jonin seems as though he'll actually train Naruto. There are so many fics in which the jonin sensei simply ignores Naruto completely or legit abuses him.
jonreeve chapter 13 . 1/19/2019
jon reeve

/Just re-read this story, and on to the sequel! I don't think those other stories other than the first sequel were written/completed when I first read this one, so they will be new territory for me.
R chapter 8 . 1/4/2019
I really liked the investigation scene at the end, but one part of it vexed me: Why would a konoha military manufacturer leave an identifying logo on the bottom of the sole? Even at the genin level, ninja should avoid any easy means of identifying them on thier equipment.
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