Reviews for First Try
Heart chapter 2 . 7/22/2018
Well at least the kids seem nice, and he seems inclined to train Naruto...
Heart chapter 1 . 7/22/2018
Awesome, dattebayo! :D Who...? Mizuki?
Katt chapter 13 . 6/27/2018
You're a stinking liar by claiming you already have the story finished, and then you decided to go full retard by graduating Naruto early but still having him ending up with Team 7. Genius!
Guess chapter 13 . 2/25/2018
Very interesting! I love the character development and real struggles.
lunamoon531 chapter 10 . 1/28/2018
Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke... you seem to be quite happy swimming in the vast river of denile
lunamoon531 chapter 7 . 1/28/2018
I'm really enjoying this fic :3
lunamoon531 chapter 4 . 1/28/2018
Gotta love Kakashi
LBH-don't give up chapter 13 . 1/2/2018
Nice story.
nadyr chapter 13 . 11/19/2017
What a stupid story, what's the point of graduating early if he's going to end up back with team 7? Having to wait years as a genin while his teammates make chunnin status is just embarrassing for Naruto, something I don't think is properly expressed here. Instead he's made to take all his accomplishments and shove them up his ass. What a disgrace.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 13 . 10/15/2017
Poor Naruto. He's been dealt an even shittier team than canon. Totally interested in some of those continuations tho.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 10 . 10/15/2017
Yaaaayyyyy! He defended himself from the pink menace and Iruka and Sarutobi are trying to be emotionally supportive. Love it. It's also great he's steadily garnering respect from his fellow ninja.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 10/15/2017
Oh good. Kakashi isn't a COMPLETE asshole currently.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 3 . 10/15/2017
More than just Sasuke is delusional and Sakura should be getting in legal trouble for attacking a shinobi, especially unprovoked.
afairysghost chapter 13 . 9/1/2017
Laialy chapter 4 . 8/1/2017
That was both a weird and funny chapter...LOVE IT
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