Reviews for Underneath the Underneath
DarkViolet7258 chapter 16 . 12/28/2017
So fuuny - I feel so lucky to find your story in this site
Yuuguregurl21 chapter 16 . 12/12/2017
When are you going to update? I want to know what happens next!
Thwelastlotus chapter 9 . 11/19/2017
I wanna know why naru has to act like naruto basically an idiot and it's annoying how she gets basically clowned by sasuke and everyone else and doesn't show any form of getting mad all she does is go the idiot route and yells say that again or do you wanna fight that's what I hated about the original naruto
meggs929 chapter 16 . 11/9/2017
2 years
AkaneShiro chapter 16 . 10/11/2017
soooo... it has been almost a year already...
lovelyhanna chapter 16 . 9/20/2017
If you have any motivation to do so, it would be amazing if you updated this. I love the story and your take on fem!naruto.
Karma chapter 16 . 9/11/2017
Aaahhh just as it was getting good (it was already good) and now it will never be updated again (like the 20 other stories I've read)
SilverStarWaters chapter 4 . 7/24/2017
I loved the sibling-esque bonding with Naru and Haku.
Jazz chapter 16 . 7/8/2017
Hey nice story I just want to say you should add a funny moment when team seven visits the bathhouse or something
Also what if Kiba and/or Neji find out Naru's gender by grooping or touching her chest and she punches them so hard it would make both Tsunde and the other femaleninjas proud
Cinamon CaT chapter 16 . 6/28/2017
PLEASE UPDATE ! NOW ! I REALLY WANT TO READ KİBAS , İNOS AND KANKUROS REACTION WENN THEY FIND OUT NARUS A GIRL ! And ...i-i ...İ WANT PAKKUN !️
No opinon chapter 14 . 6/27/2017
Well ...* silence *
omg yay chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
LOVE IT ️
Who am i chapter 10 . 6/27/2017
I WANT PAKKUN !️
Monday-Hater 0 chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Its geting interesting ...
Dark Serpent Cat chapter 16 . 6/16/2017
So I enjoyed this story and hope you get back to it soon as it has almost been a year since it was updated

That said I have some questions or suggestions

1) Why not give Naru or another member the dog contract? I enjoy seeing alternative summons for the group so I would love to see Kakashi deciding to pass down the contract to one of his students. Also the manga proved have multiple summons was possible through Sasuke so you could still give them their original summons as well. This way you can have Pakkun be in the story more. Actually it would be nice to see Kakashi pass down something to each of his students. Sasuke gets Chidori, another one gets the dogs but you would have to figure out a third item to pass down

2) can Naru use chakra chains and if not can she learned to wield a chain as a weapon

3) A sticking point that I always had with Naruto was the fact Kyuubi didn't seem to have any gifts. I mean outside of Kyuubi and Hachibi each bijuu had a special power that was passed down to their containers. Ichibi had magnet release/sand, the nibi had those flames, sanbi had coral and likely genjutsu, Goku had lava release, the five tails had steam release, the seven had the glitter and flight. Yet all we saw Hachi and Kyuu use were bijuudama unless you go by anime where the fox had wind and fire release. It is also why I love when genjutsu Naruto gains a talent for casting genjutsu breaking them being more questionable

4) A pairing I would love to see but never do is Asuma/,Naru
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