Reviews for 11 & Amy Pond The moment that changed everything
CmdrHawke667 chapter 50 . 8/22/2011
Loved all 50 chapters :D

Pleeeaassee do a sequel :D
alyssa love chapter 50 . 8/22/2011
I'm going to miss this story great job
alyssa love chapter 49 . 8/22/2011
Awe thank u for choosing me I am touch
nat-nav chapter 50 . 8/22/2011
Loved it! This is immense and had me welling up! Great Job! :) x
pondflirtingwithpond chapter 17 . 8/22/2011
This is very good, and well done for keeping up with and sticking to this story. But something's really bugging me about this, is this part set in the UK? Because in this chapter Luke couldn't go to the hospital because "Health care costs money", unless this is an alternative world, health care's free in the UK :L

Anyway, I like your dislike for Rory, I mean I do think he's a sweat-heart but Amy and The Doctor are just meant to be together!
Niro chapter 49 . 8/21/2011
I agree with Anjirika. I don't think that ever Time Lords can be pregnant for only three days. I mean, where are they getting the energy/nutrients they need to grow from? The TARDIS? But I did like the idea of her giving birth to twins. And I am also sad the story will be ending soon, but at least it was a good one.
Secrets-0f-dreams chapter 49 . 8/21/2011
lol that was so mad and funny i love the u look like a penguin bit lol. im really upset ur ending this cause i love it sooo much

:( the names are lovely btw
Howling Shadow chapter 49 . 8/21/2011
I loved that the pregnancy was quick it would be great if it was that quick.I love that Amy was pregnant with twins. The names of the babies are beautiful and suit them. I don't want this to end


but I've loved your story all the way through :)
Anjirika chapter 49 . 8/21/2011
I do like this story, and the last two chapters have been pretty good however this one was kinda short and I feel like the whole thing was rushed. It would have been much better to have the pregnancy be drawn out over a chapter or two. No matter how special Time Lords are, I doubt that they're pregnant for three days.

Plus, the whole notion of Amy being a Time Lord because she's been travelling with the Doctor and has been exposed to the untempered schism, well I'm sorry but that's a little far fetched as well. If that are the case then EVERY companion who has ever travelled with the Doctor would be half time lord too. Now, if you had explained it as because Amy & the Doctor were now in a physical relationship and THAT'S what caused her to be half-time lord then I'd buy it.

It would explain why the Doctor has always been so physically distant from his companions and why he's never been in a relationship with one. It would also explain why there are no half-timelords running around the universe...

...and I'm rambling. Sorry. I do like this story. I really do but I just feel like you're wrapping things up far too quickly.
fuckboy69 chapter 49 . 8/21/2011
Great names! Nate and Allysa.. Perfect. Hm.. I wonder how you're going to finish off River Song's story... You're leaving me curious!
Niro chapter 48 . 8/21/2011

Did not see that coming.
alyssa love chapter 48 . 8/20/2011
yay they can be together forever and omg amy pregent if it a girl can you name it after me alyssa pond just think about it
Secrets-0f-dreams chapter 48 . 8/20/2011
nooo dont end it pleaasssee you can write more, ill pay you virtually...this is amazing shes pregnant! oh and love the comback from river that was funny :( dont end it yet
Secrets-0f-dreams chapter 47 . 8/20/2011
aww that was soooo cute! love it completly and i love the bit with river
Howling Shadow chapter 47 . 8/20/2011
awwww that was so cute :)
183 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 7 .. Last Next »