Reviews for Muggle Champion
imonionspread chapter 1 . 8/7
This I fucking sensational! Props man!
SortingHat chapter 1 . 4/10
This is not the result of theft or stealing notes. ...right. I got a bridge to sell you.
sandmanwake chapter 1 . 3/28
Should have also used Fiendfire on Hogwarts while everyone was asleep and the doors were barred.
Marshman101 chapter 1 . 3/27
that was perfect
lipasnape chapter 1 . 3/5
Good.
rb2312 chapter 1 . 2/22
Nice version of fourtb year.

Hope harry re unites with hermione. And gets a trial for sirius.
thebetawholived chapter 1 . 2/7
I like the ending. His letter was actually very polite. My vocabulary would have been less so.

Thanks for sharing your story.
PLEASE READ ME chapter 1 . 2/4
Yay i like to see the full version of this story with a beginning middle and end
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
Love these versions of Harry. In the books and movies, harry came off a bit pathetic, bitchy and last but not least, angst.
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
Way to go Harry! Great one-shot. - Snake
jeanette9a chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
my play list was playing; VersaEmerge's No consequences
and I really think it fits the mood of the story. (and it made me laugh.)

lyrics:
"Everywhere I go, no one says "no" to me (cuz he won't thake thier crap)
They don’t, they don’t dare
Everything I want to feel,
The good, the bad, always indifferent
Be my muse before I walk all over you to get to the next one
You were fascinated like a fool and I lazily killed you (grande flash backs anyone?)

You’re calling me insatiable and I can’t deny
On the hunt for the irreplaceable
Impossible to find
Should I settle for less? (no wepons, nah keep 'em)
You’re good but I want the best
I want you along with the rest
I want the world with no consequences (he just left them)

Drink it up and be so mad and wild along with me till the ending
Pray to set you free ‘cause I’ll give you the hurt
They gave it to me" (couldn't be more true, eh headmaster)
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
Harsh but fair!
Sortinghat chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Do you suppose Mr Krum said 'Oh Krum!"?
YaGHeofttHaeLubvit216 chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
Now THIS was a story that I could get behind!

Pitty that Krum couldn't have had a slower exit, stage left.

Or had some rather important (to him anyway) parts removed slowly for what he did to Hermione.

All in all a very good vicarious way to feel like the little guy was finally able to stick it to the morons (with sincere appologies to those of deminished mental abilities) running the turniment. (I know, bad spelling...)

Well done!

SteveC.
Brian1972 chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
The pretext of Muggleborn Champion indicates that you got a lot of negative comments on what happened to Hermione here. I don't really see why with bad guys around bad things happen.

I think it was the lack of interest Harry seemed to show for her once she was gone. Had you included the letters and maybe him seeking her out after leaving Hogwarts it might have recived a better overall reaction.

Other than that like in you said yourself in the pretext very in tune with kb0's stroy using the same methods to get through the tournament. Overall a nice story.
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