|Reviews for The Changeling|
| Valma chapter 20 . 6/1
Amazing story. :) Thank you.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 20 . 5/8
A brilliant story from beginning till the end. Its well thought out, moving and beautiful to read, its a story that had me on the edge of my seat and unable to stop reading from the first few sentences. You really managed to capture all of the characters individual personalities and quirks; although I would have to exclude Damian from this statement as he did appear a little OOC at times, by this I mean how he came across as timid sometimes; like the fight in which Jason had to defend him, from the impression I have of Damian he would have been right beside Jason fighting the thugs. However I can understand why you would choose to portray Damian like this as it helped to bring out Jason's Big Brother instincts.
The interactions between Bruce and Jason were full of such depth, the amount of suppressed emotion you managed to convey through your writing was really impressive and all I can say is that I look forward to reading this again in the future XD.
Thanks for the great read.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 19 . 5/8
Yay for Batclan fluff XD...It can't last can it T-T
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 18 . 5/8
T-T Epic chapter.
I love how the story came full circle T-T but its not over yet
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 17 . 5/8
I was about to say thank God for the effects of blood loss but that was before I read the last few lines...Please fall unconscious before you do anything stupid T-T
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 16 . 5/8
Its almost scary how accurately you managed to portray Bruce's mindset, His initial reaction over Damian is understandable but I like how you quickly had him reprimand himself although it is a little sad that guilt was the motivator.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 15 . 5/8
Oh God someone stop him. This is so damn tense and that just makes it all the more brilliant...Is it possible for Batman to have a heart attack? and if it is can he please postpone it until he's saved Jason XP
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 14 . 5/8
That was amazing to read, the pacing was brilliant, the build up was executed perfectly and the whole damn chapter was just exciting to read. I was willing Dick to get through to Jason, desperately hoping he'd be able to stop him but it was clear when Jason's raging emotions turned into cold fury that their was no chance of anyone being able to talk him down. I'm just glad he didn't hurt Dick...that has to mean something (I might be slightly deluding myself at the moment but please let me have it T-T)
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 13 . 5/8
This cannot be good, Jason's already set to blow and now he has a target set directly before him. Just hope his brothers can talk some sense into him before he finally sees Bruce otherwise...
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 12 . 5/8
Brotherly bonding fluff: I cannot get enough of it and lucky for me there's plenty of it in this fic XD XD
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 11 . 5/8
The way you've set this up I honestly don't know which way you're going to take it when Jason meets Tim but I'm definitely looking forward to finding out
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 10 . 5/8
I really liked seeing it from Dick's point of view, it as interesting and provided a new perspective to the story.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 9 . 5/8
Dramatic and epic chapter, Thank god this series is already complete as I don't think I could handle having to wait for the next chapter.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 8 . 5/8
I love the Batbro moments between Jason and Damian in this fic. Also I cannot wait for Timmy's opportunity to say I told you so XP
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 6 . 5/8
I think Tim's just a bit too old for imaginary friends...lol oh please have Jason walk in when Tim's having a conversation with the shrine. Damian was really cute in this chapter XD