Reviews for Graffiti
Iceagesurvivor123 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Just make me cry why don't you... D:
infinityphoenix chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Remember how I said I'm not a big fan of Chell being Rattmann's daughter. You put it in such a way that it seems plausable, and even likeable. I'm still not a big fan of it, though.
Supergulo chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Totally not expecting THAT! Doug was Chell's dad instead of Cave... who apparently was mad already...

But didn't Doug work at Aperture until GLaDOS was activated? How did he dissappear then? And by that time Caroline wouldn't be old?

Also, I think he was not a test subject, but rather a survivor of the Aperture massacre, who knew all the backdoors of the facility, and hence managed to avoid GLaDOS...

I still find it good, despite my seemingly crtic, I was just pointing things out.

And the ending was nice too, poor GLaDOS...
Master of the Boot chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
One of the truly horrifying things about Glados in my opinion is her resistance to change. She's resisted just about every form of character development she's ever had. I guess she's built to be always the same. File delted, indeed.

There really is something scary about someone with so much power who ultimately never changes and never learns.
Willowwhip chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
That's deep. I like.
Skye Willow chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This is good! Way to deal with the problem, GLaDOS! Deleting it always works! *Sarcasm*

...did I just talk to a computer?
Clemerl chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Truthfully, we don't know if Doug died, the last we saw him he was asleep in cryoslumber, like Chell was, so it's never confermed(sp?) that he's dead.
TwiliPrincess049 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
(Lul, the timeframe almost bothered me. Then I got over it :D)

You know, funny thing, this is not how I imagine Caroline OR GLaDOS. Caroline seemed a little...dim, and GLaDOS, of course, would not be so emotional either.

But it actually works quite well. So bravo~!

Poor Ratmann, poor GLaDOS.

Poor Chell, probably still stuck in a cornfield with her companion cube...
CagedSnow chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Aw... this was sweet... XD Another good theory, too...

How about a version in which Doug IS Still Alive?