|Reviews for Reproduction Trouble|
| MisterBlik chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Damn I feel so sorry for Private! Please continue this story, it sounds really interesting.
| Octavo Nous chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Oh My God.
I hadn't noticed you uploaded this! It's freakin' awesome! xD
Hahahaha I love the sort of narrative you use, it feels like you're just explaining something really simple and easy but then the things you actually say are hilarious!
And woo! Maya rocks! But only because she was a fellow Latina. Otherwise she's so mean! xD Hahaha I love quetzals they're so pretty and green...
I feel a little bad for Private... xD And Skipper's thoughts on him hahahahaha
You have to continue this! It's awesome!
| Jack chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
I think that you should more the sex a bit more detailed. Adds a little more pizzazz