Reviews for Fallen Star |
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![]() ![]() AAAAA, this was so lovely! I love all the little details (and references, haha) you added in this fic, as well as the great plot! Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() Best fanfic ever! OMG I am speechless! You made me cry, laugh and smile of joy. What incredible writing skills you have! Not only the story but how you developed the character... I am so happy to learn you have written more stories! Tha ks so much for your immense work of bringing joy to those you read your pages. Endless thank you... |
![]() ![]() OMG.. I can't this so well written story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing... is the on;y word that comes to my mind best fic ever |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. I’ve never particularly shipped Loki and Jane, but I’m so here for it with this fic. I’m a little jealous of Jane, for having Loki’s heart…but mostly I’m so HAPPY for Loki. So enchanted by the journey he’s been on through this fic, and how you made it possible for him to mend things with his family. Your writing is so gorgeous and eloquent and clever - the quality of this fic was on par with an edited, published novel. Finishing it left me with the same bittersweet ache of finishing a good book - I loved it and wished it could go on, even as the ending felt right. Thank you again for writing this fic, from one writer to another. EDIT: no sooner had I finished writing this review when I thought your username sounded familiar. So I Googled it, and now I know you've written lots and lots of novels! I can't wait to check them out, as well as any other fanfics you've written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so, I binge read this story completely yesterday and immediately started reading "In A Crowd of Thousands" without reviewing which, honestly, is so incredibly rude of me. But I guess it says something about your writing skill? Anyway, this story absolutely captivated me. I love the bouncing of POVs and how Jane doesn't see Loki as Loki until near the end. It helps us see that she truly believes him to be a different person and explains her shock and hesitancy when he's revealed. Also the fact that their first kiss isn't till the end, because she's loyal to Thor and he is also, in a way, loyal to Thor? Perfection. I adored this story. Excellent work. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful read, thank you. |
![]() ![]() I read this whole fanfic years ago and it never left my mind. now that there's a new loki show, i remembered about it, and seriously spent an hour looking for this story again. this is literally my favorite fanfiction i've ever read. thank you so much for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feeling nostalgic so I decided to reread this fic and it's still just as amazing as when I read it years ago. BRB gonna be rereading the whole series now ; |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are brilliant. That is all. ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m rereading this story, and I forget every time just how beautiful your images in this chapter are to me. You have an immense talent, and this gorgeous chapter continues to steal my breath. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this immensely it was thought out and written really well and even made me cry at the end. Thank you |
![]() ![]() What a wonderful and well thought out story. You are an eloquent writer. I loved your story. You should consider writing professionally. |
![]() ![]() LOVE THIS SO MUCH I LITERALLY CAN'T BREATHE FROM JOY! Cried and laughed so much I thought I might crack a rib. Gosh, what a book. Absolutely beautiful and this is my 20th time reading it in 3 days! (I am obsessed in case you could not tell.) So sad it's over, but thank God you have written so many other great Lokane fics. Well, I'm off to read the Lokistone. Again Alydia, phenomenal job. Your work is helping me not die of boredom :D |
![]() ![]() Wow. This really hit the feels. Like a glorious, hope, sorrow, and joy filled punch to the heart. This book is SO beautiful. So utterly sweet, heart aching, and earnest that you can't help but fall in love with it. Alydia, you are awesome! I also love your other fanfic, Frozen Heart. And your other fanfic, The Lokistone. And your other fanfic Brother Avengers. And your other oneshot fanfics... did I mention I love your work? |