Reviews for Bounce House
Sunggi chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
i will never going to see the bounce houses the same way. This was good, you should try it with the other games (I saw a dunk tank in there... :3) but this really was good, never wrote smut? yeah right :P(ok i will stop teasing now xD)
rainy dayz and silver dreams chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
That was a fun story, enjoyed it very much. Great job!
Never Turning Back chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
That was GOOD! I think that maybe you should turn this into a multi chapter where Kendall fucks Logan in the strangest places. I would totally read that!
MarissaLeeC chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
This wasn't bad! At all! Especially not for your first time writing smut!
Jonghwa chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
don't worry it wasn't a fail at all :) it was good!
Lil' Boy Monster chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Hehehe that was definitely something different. Of course Carlos would have such an awesome party I mean it's freaking Carlos we' re talking about! This perfect it had comedy, sexy sex, and fluff. Only Kendall would want to fuck Logan on a bounce house. Gasp whe you said they bounced a little as he thrust. Oooo that was so hot! I can picture it clearly in my mind. Fucking thrust and bounce. Mmmm love it.
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