|Reviews for Offside|
| emmettandme chapter 114 . 6/12/2013
it does not a lot of sense now that Charlie knew about the "art type" because this relationship was really short, and far away from Forks.
| eastcoastbroad chapter 26 . 6/12/2013
Snuggle time with Eddie yay
| eastcoastbroad chapter 22 . 6/12/2013
Awwwww I feel bad for Eddie
| eastcoastbroad chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
Not really a Shakespeare fan sorry. I skip those parts
| eastcoastbroad chapter 18 . 6/12/2013
Hahahaha Doucheward I love it. And Jess the Ho. Too funny
| eastcoastbroad chapter 15 . 6/12/2013
Why are guys such dicks? Lol
| eastcoastbroad chapter 7 . 6/12/2013
Wow. Mean Dr. Cullen. Still debating that one. Not sure how I feel but I think I really hate him.
| eastcoastbroad chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
Love that its following the original...somewhat
| eastcoastbroad chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Lol Soccerward. I love Edward when he's mean. Can't wait to dig further. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/11/2013
:( it was Esme on the wreck. I had hopes that it was Elizabeth or anybody else. How is Carlisle going to find peace?
Im leaving to cry now.
| PuppetStrings19 chapter 125 . 6/10/2013
I just finished your story after literally reading in three days! (And it's finals week at school!) It was so good! I'm sorry I didn't review throughout the chapters, I was just so compelled I had to keep the 'pages' turning! I loved it!
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/10/2013
parenthical love has a lesbian Alice, lets see what did you do with Jasper.
| Guest chapter 125 . 6/9/2013
| Messy Bronze Hair chapter 125 . 6/5/2013
Omg! I loved the story! It was amazing! But I have to tell you three things!
1. You have way to long authors note in this story, it takes up almost half of the chapters! And that's sad, since the chapters are so short.
2. After the accident Edward was unable to play soccer again because of his injury, that is just bad. I actually thought that some miracle would occur, and his leg would heal properly and he would play soccer again and go into the pros, but no. Was so used to hear and read about soccerward so this was a weird change, just like that. And the perfect couple wasn't so perfect anymore! :(
3. The lemons! Where were them? I mean Edward and his delicious body didn't had some action with Bella's amazing legs!? Jeez, I honestly thought that Edward would slam Bella into a wall and do a lot of "things" to her. Hehe!
But I still loved the story. I sat (lied down) with my iPhone and just couldn't stop reading. This story has gotten so many reviews and that was mainly the reason why I read it in the first place. And oh boy, how I liked it!
You have an great imagination! And again thanks for the amazing story and your thoughts! You shared them and that gave me an opportunity to read it. So thanks a lot. This was a little different from the usual Bella and Edward story's I read and I enjoyed it a lot!
Keep writing like that and I promise that I would read the rest of your stories!
Long review but that got everything I had to say! Thanks from me!
Messy Bronze Hair
| Messy Bronze Hair chapter 103 . 6/5/2013
Omg! Finally! Carlisle is dead and Edward is free! :D