|Reviews for Offside|
| lmb1 chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
I was so excited to see a new story. Fresh and original as always!
| Eric's No 1 lover chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
He really is a shit! Can't wait for more.
| thunnababy chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Wasn't it Betty Davis who once said "Fasten your seat belts baby, it's going to be a bumpy ride"? Yeah, he's a bonafide douche, no doubt about that, but boy I can't wait for the fall. :)
| afonz chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
I love how blunt Edward is. What a cocky bastard...I love it. I'm going to go and look at pretty boy in shin guards now and imagine it's Edward.
| WeeHelenxX chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
I actually love this story even tho Edward is a fucker. I can't wait till Bella rips him a new one. :)
| cejsmom chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Lol! You love a bad Edward as much as I do. I like how you write him anyways. I still dont get those who flail on ya? Do they not understand how these stories work! Glad you are getting the plot together. Lol!
| aciepey chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Yeah, you know what, he is an ass, but if it were B being the ass, nobody would read. a bunch of double standard, abuse-loving bitches, we are.
btw, please write a good Bitchella some day. One that gets off just like E just did in the locker room, because I am sick of that double standard. Just sayin.
| HollBeth chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Yes, he is Prickward, but I'm still all in! I know he needs to get knocked down some pegs, and I can't wait to see how that plays out, and for how long it lasts!
And, oh yeah - shin guards and nothing else? Yes, please!
| crazykatwp chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Omg he is a doucheward but I am sticking it out to see where u r going with this
| eriley99 chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
I just keep thinking "esme would kill him if she knew...". Sticking around till the end. If I can make it thru CBWR, this should be easy, right?
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
*starts cracking up laughing*
Holy shitballs! All I heard that whole chapter was bad 70's background dubs
Bom chicka wow wow chicka wow wow!
This is great! GO CREW! *guffaws*
| KikiTheDreamer chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Holy crap! I love how he just keeps getting away with that! Yea I'm totally waiting for an update. I need some *quality* Doucheward/smut.
| PeepToe chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Can I get another "OMG, what a douche, but I still need a pic of him in shin guards and nothing else" from ya?
Yeah, that about sums it up. But honestly, I still believe people only get taken advantage of if they allow themselves to be used. I know the formula, though, and suspect he'll grow up eventually. Like you said, not so much in real life, although I know a few stories of total 'wads who turned noble for the right girl. Again, it takes two to tango...
So... where is this shin guard pic? ;-)
| barburella chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
From the looks of it, you'll have to think REALLY hard on some redeeming qualities in him. LMAO.
| lt90 chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
haha, yeah. I'd take an almost naked pic lol