|Reviews for Offside|
| Danish Muse chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Just found this, and I am really looking forward to seeing how it develops!
I am from Denmark where soccer is kind of a big deal, so this is going to be a lot of fun to read!
So far, so good! :)
| Sunsetwing chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Wow, he is an ass! I hope Bella's the one to not take his shit.
| stepheniemeyerrules chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I am very glad to read your new story. I missed the excitement, which CBWR? brought to me every day. I am so amazed at your creativity and discipline, which make it possible to start a new marathon with this story. Looking forward to more from Soccerward!
| Teresa R chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Oh ya he is a dick and tell me Riley is Bella's brother? I cant wait till they meet and she puts him in his place please let that happen
| Roshambo83 chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
I hope Riley isn't Bella's little brother! What an ass!
| lynard69 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I totally agree. Soccer players use ALL their muscles and so are the most ripped out there. I also love me some soccer players. YUM!
| HollBeth chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
You've still got me. If he gets worse, I wanna see! Yeah, he's pretty much a major asshole, and I'm sure all the girls are complete idiots for going only for the pretty when he most likely treats them like crap. Sad, little chickies, sad!
I can't wait to see what he does next, or just how doe-eyed Bella is going to eff up his world - seems like he has it coming!
| sabiga808 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
love the story. great job
| sheviking chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Oh yeah, the word asshole definitely comes to mind. Several times. I need to put you on author's alert from now when you keep posting new stories. (And I LOVE you for it!)
Excited for soccerward (or real football as is the case where I live) :)
| Canyaceme chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Asshole is right!
| trisha63 chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Oh Shay I see you are up to no good again! Interesting story idea, when I think of soccer I automaticly think and dream and most diffinately drool over David Beckham. Yum! But I can see Edward in the full soccer gear all sweaty and breathing hard, wow now that is a vision. Just like many of your Edwards, this one is an absolute douche bag, dick head, but I have always kind of liked the bad boy, so bring on your worst and let's get this party started! LOL Great writing, as usual. Take care, Trisha :}
| TessLouise chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Wow - definitely the bigging asshole-Edward you've written to date. This is going to be SO much fun!
| Salix caprea chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Oh, he's an asshole. You know, if it was another author I would probably stop reading after this chapter... it's just that, it's very hard to convince me a character like this one can be "miraculously" changed or atone himself. But, I'm curious what you would think of...
Curious about Bella too.
| floridagrl16 chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Fuckin a! My blood is pumping I'm soo stoked!
| pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Oh honey, cocky Soccerward's got me hooked! Beyond well done, as all of you stories are. Thanks so much for sharing.