Primordial magic. Love alot like ancient magic is stronger then any other magic known to man. Even Dark magic cannot stand a chance against, and of course amortentia cannot replicate Love of the pirest kind.

I have loved reading this story but i was unable to read chapter 17

bruh this isnt duke griffindor this is al running a little b! harry's life for him like wtf

Nice story so far; just started reading last night and I'm into chapter 5.
One thing; you REALLY NEED a Beta. And I'm talking some serious editing. Grammar, punctuation, syntax... they all come together to make a much more readable story.
I wish you luck in finding one.

An amazing story. I was captivated from the start and put my whole day on hold to read it. Thank goodness that my son can cook or we all would have gone hungry today. I’m resting up to night, well it’s 01:36 so I suppose it’s still classed as night, ready to attack the sequel later on today. Thanks for a fantastic emotional rollercoaster, loved Al, so sorry to see him go.

Alvin York? REALLY?
Don't tell me; he was a Sergeant, right?
Good start; I'm gonna keep on reading...

This end battle scene is confusing to me. It is super late as I read it, but I don't understand why Dumbledore did any of it! Dumbledore planned to attack the school? For what reason? And Voldemort should have been attacking at the same time? So two dark wizards against school children? It doesn't make any sense. Dumbledore needed Harry to fulfill the prophecy. He wouldn't go on a full scale attack with Voldemort in the picture. Nor would he go into war. He needs to be the Leader of the Light to get control over the Wizarding world. He is a planner. This isn't his style at all. It is too brash after so many years of planning.

I'm really not happy with the direction that you went with Al's backstory. He is really not a good person and has shown himself disloyal and untrustworthy several times now. I really don't trust him, but I want to.

Happy 1,000 reviews! Malfoy and Snape are quite dumb aren't they?

At least the castle has enough sense to throw out Umbridge. I would have thought Snape would have been thrown out years ago if the castle was capable of such things.

So is Umbridge going to stay a toad now? I think it would be fitting!

This story is interesting, but your use of tense can be confusing and awkward. Like in their declaration, they use "would". "I would grow old with you." It doesn't make sense. They should say, "I will grow old with you." I guess I should check your profile to see if English is a second language. If it is a second language you have my respect for writing in it!

A much better trial and I hope that Arthur can be helped.

Sirius' Slitherin side is showing here!

I enjoy a story with a strong Sirius and Remus who act like adults instead of misunderstood teens! A great start to a story!