Reviews for Evening the Score: Play On
SaMiszczak0726 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
This is a beautiful add on and I rather enjoyed it. Especially the ending. There part about MVP and Dad titles. It really touched me b/c so many people lose sight of that. I enjoy your stories and i believe I have read all of them posted here. Time to move on to your favorites. It my way of finding stories that I love to read.
pkitten21 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Oh how I've missed soccerward! I think I might have to go back and re-read the story again!
HollBeth chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Just perfect!
The Girl With The Umbrella chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I LOVED IT! Oh my God, I'm going to sound like such a fan girl but I just can't helpt it. I had a huge smile on my face as I read through this. It was really, truly AMAZING.

Daddy Edward might just win over soccer Edward LOL. I loved all the caring stuff he said and just the way he acted as a dad. Plus the whole tittle thing at the end as beautiful. I could imagine Edward being called over the loudspeakers and the cheering of his team mates. Bella being angry at the other soccer moms was hilarious.

"Those women are just jealous that you landed such a hottie and have had sex with me... at least twice"... BEST LINE EVER! LOL.

Edward freaking out over Seth and Katie was so funny, wait till her first date.

Naming their son Anthony Charles was a great idea, I'm glad they got another kid.

OK and I basically just described the whole outtake but it was hard to pick ONE thing to talk about and review. It was great to get something from you again. GREAT JOB!
nysue chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
AWWWW! That futuretake was so awesome! Poor B though, no drugs. Edward was at her side. Katie is a cutie pie! I've missed your E and B.
cosmom chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
that was perfect. i will never get enough of them. love it!

j x.
KeeWit chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This was great!
smilton chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Awww.. I loved it! It was so sweet! I love soccerward, but I think I love daddyward even more! Great job!
CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Oh yeah. Great job. It was warm and fuzzy, just how I like it. Glad to see this story continue. You go girl.

pamaroo chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! And now the outtakes for it too :)
malleelee chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Soccerward and Bella make me smile. Thank you for a happy look into the future.
Isabella Jame Swan Cullen chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I loved it! It was perfect! A little upset it is a one shot but it is a perfect one shot! I love alot! Can't wait to see what next wonderful thing you update! Hope it is soon!

Isabella Jame Swan Cullen XxX
mcanary chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This is just too sweet! Loved this futuretake, keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
linz832 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
So please to see a bit of the future for these 2
Jeni K chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
AWE! Katie is too cute. Bella is one tough woman. But I know what she was feeling there at the hospital, I have 3 kids, my son was born second and I went through that with no drugs either, I barely made it to the hospital in time. Edward is too cute for his own good, God I wish he was mine.
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