Reviews for Unattainable
ProdigyPsycho chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
This story is actually pretty cool. It has a really mature feel to it. Not many people can successfully achieve it, without making the story boring. The end I think was a bit too forced, but other than that a really good story
crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Aw, the ending was sad, I actually feel bad for Lance. D: But he's going to have to keep trying if he wants Yellow to change her view of him. :3
ChampionKitty chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I find this beautiful! You should be more proud, the little interaction was made up with the narraration plus this is a really cute couple!
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Good story, I like it

I think they are in character.
ReploidCat chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I feel sad for him, although Yellow's reaction was to be expected after all, after spouting stuff about wanting to kill everyone except the pokemon.
Unbecoming Me chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I love it! More please?