Reviews for Outside of Time
MarineLvr84 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Uh..HELL YEAH! I mean come on! this is omg perfection at its best.

Now this is a porno I would defiantly pay with my whole paycheck to see, you know when you put out there that Bats was saying the Jokers name like a porno.

Ooh-rah

Marine
MysticValkyrie chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
That was unbelievably realistic. I imagine that is there had been a few more fan girls on the board of writers for this movie, this is exactly how this would play out. Great characterization, wonderful descriptions, and yummy, yum, yum, for the smexiness! You should definaty write more for this pairing, you have a gift!

-EyeImagine
ArtistOfLight chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Love it, Love it, LOVE IT! I love that this is happening in the middle of TDK! Personally though, I enjoy the descriptions of Joker's and Bruce's thoughts. Bruce is truly in turmoil about what's going on and the Joker has no guilt about anything what so ever! The twisted relationship between them is super fascinating. So great job! I look forward to what you'll post next, so keep up the good work! Hugs and Kisses!
KitCat Italica chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Um, FUCK YES THEY ARE HAVING SEX IN THE DARK KNIGHT. IF YOU DIDN'T PICK UP ON THAT IN THE THEATER, YOU MISSED THE ENTIRE POINT OF THE FILM. THEN I'LL AGREE YOU HAVE ISSUES. XD XD XD

Dude, this has got to be my favorite from you. Normally I'd pick out little bits and pieces and dissect every bit I loved, but...I just can't. Because that would involve copy-pasting THE WHOLE DAMN THING. This is awesome. Wonderfully, delectably awesome.

You get in Bruce's head so well. Soooo well. That, I think, is what makes this piece. You catch every nuance of his torment and conflicting thoughts, and rational/instinctual thinking. It felt like I was swimming through the flowing river of his inner turmoil and his ultimate inability to fight what he has with the Joker. All the little figurative language/descriptions just made it feel so real and goddamn tangible. LOVE IT.

I'm also glad you didn't write Rachel off in his head, too. It's part of what kept it so realistic and nailed it on the head, so MAJOR MAJOR kudos to you for that.

And the sex. Was hot. Duh. XD And I wonder what /boats/ it is Joker has to catch...could it be...a ferryboat or two? xDD And I suppose the boat where Lau and the pile o' dough, too, where he meets with the Chechen and gets to feed the dogs :D. So nice reference there :)

I think I did catch a runon sentence or two that could've been split up into several sentences, and maybe a grammar/typo or two, but I forgot where they were in the midst of reading :3. If you'd like I could pass that along in a PM if I find them again. :)

But seriously, this made my fucking DAY. Things in the way of B/J slash are slowing waaayyyy down, on LJ too but especially on this site, so I'm glad to finally get some fresh material to read. Especially some as good as this! Whatever you were on when you wrote this, KEEP TAKING IT, IT'S DOING SOMETHING RIGHT. AND SEND ME SOME, TOO. ;D
AnaBananabby chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Love it! It’s the perfect idea and i love the way you incorporated the movie in this. I only hope that this won’t be a one-shot for long and that you will make other chapters continuing with the story ;) ~love a.
Bernarde chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I loved it. This is easily the best written story in this fandom that I've read so far... Congrats.