Reviews for Unexpected |
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Guest chapter 24 . 6/13 Now, if only SF could teach you about using apostrophes correctly. |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/12 As well as you write, I'm amazed you don't know the proper use of "your" and "you're" (not to mention "to" and "too"). Perhaps if you had a proofreader? ? ? |
Guest chapter 39 . 3/5 Will Bella ever be friends with Charlotte again? |
Guest chapter 35 . 3/5 Where is Bella’s half sister? Is Paul still alive? |
Guest chapter 30 . 3/5 Emmett understands what little one will feel in the future |
Guest chapter 29 . 3/5 Can Bella help raise Gianna’s son? |
Guest chapter 26 . 3/5 Was the ending part of the plan? |
Guest chapter 25 . 3/5 Tanya and Jasper? What happened to Rose? |
Guest chapter 24 . 3/4 Please don’t make Rosalie a bad guy |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/4 So Alice is against the Cullens? |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/4 Jasper and Alice? |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/4 Where is Paul? |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/3 Was her dad killed because of her mother? |
QueenGB chapter 41 . 12/18/2023 I just want to say i revisit this story at least twice a year. Sorry i dont always review. Sometimes the site doesnt let me. I love it very much and this Bella and Edward are so amazing. I might have asked this before but how did Carlisle fix Esme’s funeral walkout screw up within the family. It was a big deal but I would love to know how he did it in your mind. BTW i love this wedding chapter it would be a wedding i would have enjoyed. |
Just Sus chapter 32 . 8/20/2023 Gawd, don't they ever get a break, and some peace? Sheesh! |