Reviews for Unexpected
Guest chapter 24 . 6/13
Now, if only SF could teach you about using apostrophes correctly.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/12
As well as you write, I'm amazed you don't know the proper use of "your" and "you're" (not to mention "to" and "too"). Perhaps if you had a proofreader? ? ?
Guest chapter 39 . 3/5
Will Bella ever be friends with Charlotte again?
Guest chapter 35 . 3/5
Where is Bella’s half sister? Is Paul still alive?
Guest chapter 30 . 3/5
Emmett understands what little one will feel in the future
Guest chapter 29 . 3/5
Can Bella help raise Gianna’s son?
Guest chapter 26 . 3/5
Was the ending part of the plan?
Guest chapter 25 . 3/5
Tanya and Jasper? What happened to Rose?
Guest chapter 24 . 3/4
Please don’t make Rosalie a bad guy
Guest chapter 14 . 3/4
So Alice is against the Cullens?
Guest chapter 12 . 3/4
Jasper and Alice?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/4
Where is Paul?
Guest chapter 6 . 3/3
Was her dad killed because of her mother?
QueenGB chapter 41 . 12/18/2023
I just want to say i revisit this story at least twice a year. Sorry i dont always review. Sometimes the site doesnt let me. I love it very much and this Bella and Edward are so amazing. I might have asked this before but how did Carlisle fix Esme’s funeral walkout screw up within the family. It was a big deal but I would love to know how he did it in your mind. BTW i love this wedding chapter it would be a wedding i would have enjoyed.
Just Sus chapter 32 . 8/20/2023
Gawd, don't they ever get a break, and some peace? Sheesh!
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