Reviews for Unexpected
Guest chapter 5 . 8/3/2021
"You're parents are watching us" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. Gah! I don't think she means "You are parents are watching us."
kneon chapter 43 . 7/15/2021
Amazing story. Thank you for sharing. Can't wait for seqto finish so I can start that.
kneon chapter 44 . 7/15/2021
Such great insight of what was going on from other's point of view.
blb1000 chapter 35 . 6/1/2021
That should take care of most or all of the Aro's. Hope there's not a straggler left...
blb1000 chapter 1 . 5/28/2021
Fingers crossed for her...
Guest chapter 43 . 5/17/2021
Just found this story. Thank you. Amazing work
Zveka chapter 45 . 5/18/2021
Excellent story :)
Off for the second part
Zveka chapter 38 . 5/15/2021
Love this Bella
Guest chapter 39 . 5/13/2021
so pissed off she forgave her so easily bella wont be a spiteful bitch wen matteo dates. Im pissed with edward too forcing her to talk so soon so esme has been a bitch for mths apologised and continued being a bitch one little conversation and all is forgiven its fucking wrong carlisle should of gone further she only sorted things out with bella because she was scared of losing edward and the kids she doesnt care if bella lives or dies
Guest chapter 38 . 5/13/2021
thank god people are finally siding with bella shes done nothing but be loyal and esme is being a spiteful bitch she needs to be put in her place by carlisle i wouldnt of taken it as long as ahe has an i also wouldnt subject myself to her company i hope carlisle does chastise and discipline her she needs a slap or a riding across her arse but i dont think its that type of story the thought of her being inn pain makes me smile after the emotional pain shes subjected bella too grrr RANT OVER
Guest chapter 30 . 5/8/2021
its unfair that mattteo is wanted and alices little girl is being shipped off its not the innocent babies fault y is demitries baby more important they shouldnt have killed alice if the option is putting the baby in care thats no life and punishing a poor defenceless baby who will grow up with massive abandonment issues its fucking cruel the cullens should be ashamed of themselves
Guest chapter 29 . 5/8/2021
i know alice betrayed the cullens or whatever but i dont like how edward and bella handled killing her a bullet is protocol from what ive read and documenttaries on the mafia drowning her is damn evil an uncalled for and for edward to kill a woman is wromg too. Also why the hell has bella got so much sway who died an made her god that was not her decision to make she needs to be put in her place its edward carlisle and jaspers decision but she jumped in thereby taking over which is NOT her place
Azlady2003 chapter 43 . 4/16/2021
so rose wasn't a mole until Alice pushed her... was she with Emmett for the right reasons? so daniel promised her the kid and let her raise it just for the family to take her back, no way alec's wife loves that kid or wants it so why take the baby? what happened with renee and bella's half sister? did they ever get rescued? was Jasper going to jail the straw that broke the camel's back? I would think being in shootouts would be more than enough to know if you can handle it. if Bella wants a big family they gotta get a bigger house lol
Azlady2003 chapter 41 . 4/16/2021
is she taking photos of everyone cuz jasper said their is a mole and we're searching for it still cuz I don't think if he uncovered that yet since he thought that after nate
Azlady2003 chapter 38 . 4/16/2021
glad paul's ok. so daniel is now groveling for mercy cuz his families take over didn't go well? so seth now is deciding not to be the in in the family with the police but fully work out in the open with cullens? wouldn't it be better to keep him as a mole in the department? though chicago is a very corrupt law system. esmes treatment of Bella is so 180 it's almost like she was fake in the beginning
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