Reviews for Unexpected
Azlady2003 chapter 36 . 4/16/2021
hope paul is ok. glad they are going to take out those who started this mess. I wish they also took ok bella's families homes for betraying her too. love how you made sure the time change was included, since ny is 1 hr ahead of chicago. wonder why the feds think Edward and jasper can get to my do all this in ny and back to Chicago at the same time... that's about a 12 hr drive or a 3 hr flight. did they make a deal with Daniel? why expect his call. why would bella trust peter after peter went MIA and betrayed her and Edward (she knows that he was in italy helping the aros and she knows he was ignoring her texts way before she sent char packing)
Azlady2003 chapter 34 . 4/16/2021
so why is edwards family suddenly anti bella? do they blame her for the drama? wonder if bella's blood family is pitting the aros and cullens against each other cuz they want to take over? can't believe someone who was close to bella and grew up with her would all of a sudden decide to be ok with killing her, wonder why they are ok with sacrificing their family member? did peter use bella coming back to visit him as a way to get close to the cullens? I think if Bella knows that peter was involved with trying to kill her and Edward she would be ok and even kill peter herself. I think alec knew the cullens were there cuz of a rat and faked his death. there is no way Antonio was not in the known or didn't help plan it based on the smirk. he wants both ny and Chicago. so the rest of the families decided to side with the aros in this war...hope they pay dearly. so the 4 that were pissed didn't know about the ambush? but 5 did (since you said 9 remained) ... aro did start all this in his greed. wonder if Daniel escaped to call the police (if those were really police) cuz he wants out of the life or cuz that is part of the plan (perhaps he attacked the women)? who shot aro the police or the other remaining families? if phil lied and said the women were busy does that mean phili was a traitor and in on the attack? with how often they have been attacked at the house they need to sell that house and move or make it more secure. they should have had most of everyone at that secure apt they have been safe there.
Azlady2003 chapter 32 . 4/16/2021
so if antonio took back over the family and then gave it to Daniel... why was he in italy playing into the plan of the whole saul debt being paid unless alec played his old man too?
Azlady2003 chapter 30 . 4/16/2021
so was this all really alice's plan and she's just starting drama for attention?
Azlady2003 chapter 26 . 4/16/2021
wonder why they are having demetri do this...since he was the one who took her to the safe house to await Edward and sent her on the plane, wouldn't Alice know demetri would tell the cullens? also if Alice loves her child and wants free from everything why the fuck is she making herself come back like a bad penny and keep stirring trouble?
Azlady2003 chapter 29 . 4/16/2021
I thought carlisle kept no plants that people can hide in on his land... wonder how someone is in the trees. bella knows they are in high alert she shouldn't discount things as her imagination and let Edward investigate it, hopefully Edward put it together by her reaction and eye gaze.
Azlady2003 chapter 22 . 4/16/2021
so hiring bella who had ties to his family was a coincidence...bella wasnt with Edward when he hired her... wonder how he planned to get Alice noticed by jasper cuz that didn't happen till japer saw bella's photo. seems they need to tell alex's dad what happening since alec okayed felix to be killed to cover his own ass. does felix only care about the affair cuz it was his brother? he was cheating on Alice so only fair Alice cheats. still wondering who carlo is if it's not antonio. so if Alec was able to get that connected with eyes in Chicago, this all happened before bella entered the picture so the cullens were getting to relax before her.
Azlady2003 chapter 21 . 4/16/2021
so the aros weren't after bella it was only felix and that was cuz he needed revenge against the cullens cuz of Alice...and felix got lucky that bella's family had a history with his family he could use. so is the aros and bella's families still working with the feds to take over Chicago?
Azlady2003 chapter 20 . 4/16/2021
so the aros and bella's family is working with the feds to take over Chicago...I'm thinking bella's family is helping the aros in order to try to make up for what saul did and get in their good graces
Azlady2003 chapter 20 . 4/16/2021
so who is carlo now? if carlo is daniels dad, and Alec is his brother... does that mean carlo is the 1st aro but I thought the very 1st aro's (alec's dad) name started with an A... so the old aro family boss raped renee? I'm lost on this family tree
Azlady2003 chapter 16 . 4/15/2021
you'd think they would have checked all the rooms before relaxing. felix is crazy if he thinks he can escape free. they knew in italy that Renee and the girl ran so she must have run to felix
Azlady2003 chapter 9 . 4/15/2021
it shouldn't matter that renee showed up late, they still got the daughter of saul. that's who was promised to them. plus bella is older than 16 too. I'm guessing saul breaking sal's illusions of his girl and causing him to kill himself is why felix wants both renee and Bella as revenge? but I'm really thinking he wants Bella cuz she's with cullen and he wants to some how use her to get power in cullens terrority? perhaps make a deal that cullen can keep her if their child is married to a aro child or cullen can keep bella and the debt be paid off if cullen gives him certain amount of territory? so jasper is the oldest and set to take over so I don't see how Edward would matter to aros as much.
Azlady2003 chapter 8 . 4/15/2021
if renee ended up with an aro (carlos daughters son) why are they after bella as the debt has been fulfilled...seems she wanted to take Bella with her to feed her to the wolves in her place?
Azlady2003 chapter 7 . 4/15/2021
rereading this to catch up for the sequel... but it's like it's all new. love it. wonder why they want Bella when saul only promised his daughter which would be renee, so Bella shouldn't count and if she does over renee then why not a daughter of one of sauls sons? and why are they freaked with renee in italy...does this mean the aros did get renee and she made the deal to trade her for her daughter?
jujufa chapter 30 . 4/13/2021
Not gonna lie, sirt of pissed about the baby being handed over to them. Didn’t really feel like they were ready just yet, and I was lookin so much forward to them preparing for their first child, not it being rushed into their arms so quickly...
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