|Reviews for Kingdom Hearts: REMIX!|
| bigbeno37 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Okay, no offence, but instead of a book, this seems more like a script. I have no idea what your intention was, so if it was to make a plausible script, well, here you have it. Loving this chapter already, but perhaps try and make it more...like a book (no lines such as 'Sora: That voice again!' but instead 'The strange voice boomed around the boys. 'That voice again!' exclaimed Sora in both confusion and bewilderment)
| KHsupergeek1286 chapter 7 . 7/11/2012
this is so cool but one question who's jimmy?
| Rayquayza002 chapter 5 . 6/11/2012
Did you put a Doctor Who reference?
| Zexion12 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Nice i loved it very exciting story. best story i read all day :)
| Aqua7KH chapter 4 . 7/11/2011
this is a preety good story. I do see grammer mistakes though. Its ok i have alot of grammer mistakes too lol. but i got 2 questions. Why is it in dialog fourm? (even though i dont mind dialog fourm. And what show is Jimmy from?