Reviews for His Bite (ON HIATUS)
jk chapter 13 . 4/19
hey bella you know that disgusting used up whore you love? when you left him...he spent all his time away from you looking for girls to fuck and kill...nice guy huh?
jk chapter 11 . 4/19
oooohh this makes perfect fucking sense...lets go with the asshole that killed me...that sounds like a perfect idea...maybe she should stop at a store and grab some bleach to pour into her pussy before she does anything else...she probably has vamp aids now
jk chapter 8 . 4/19
soooo heres what I'm super confused about...Edward was in the lake and bella was alone...sooooooowhy couldn't she take the gag out herself? he didn't bind her fucking hands...LOL
jk chapter 6 . 4/19
god shes so fucking naïve! shes plays right into his crap just like all the other 200 girls hes seduced,fucked and killed. I was really hoping bella would be different but even if she drastically changes her mind its too late in MY mind
jk chapter 4 . 4/19
anyone else absolutely pissed that bella is such a easy fucking whore?
can she really not see through Edward?
hes so fucking gross in this story...when he kissed her I wanted to throw up!
jk chapter 1 . 4/19
WOW this Edward? Hes a total piece of shit!
he says just 2...TWO A FUCKING YEAR! and hes been on his own for what? 80 years? that's 160!

please DO NOT let bella be this nasty piece of shits mate...bella deserves way better then this used up dirty fucker
quisha1991 chapter 12 . 8/10/2012
Oh snap... What's going to happen?
quisha1991 chapter 11 . 8/9/2012
Wtf, I expected the Cullen's to put up a bigger fight than that... But I guess it all comes down to Bella's feelings
quisha1991 chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
Ooh, someone's not a happy vampire
quisha1991 chapter 9 . 8/7/2012
Look at Edward, ready to protect her after he had thoughts of killing her
quisha1991 chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
Poor Edward, he don't know what to do with hisself... Poor Bella!
quisha1991 chapter 7 . 8/7/2012
Oh snap, the seed is done... Let's see if he's able to stop
quisha1991 chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
Oh snap, shit just got real
quisha1991 chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
Poor Alice, trying her best to stop the inevitable... Can't wait to see how this go
quisha1991 chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
They finally meet! You gotta love Alice and her interfering... I wonder will Bella be the one to stop his hunting ways
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