Reviews for My Immortal By BriarBaneRose
DragongirlM chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Leeches Lolita chapter 2 . 7/21/2011
I think that the reason she uses white foundation on her pale skin is because she hopes that if she can make herself pale enough she'll become invisible. I'd like that very much.

You've made this story ten times funnier. Good job!
serendipite chapter 16 . 6/2/2011
Hello !

Firstly, I'm french, so I guess I'll make some mistakes (with words, I mean)

I've already read the Immortal story during a particularly stupid deal with a friend (cause yes, even in france, we know that awful story... Whatever.) And I really found it disgusting. Unreadable !

And now, I read your commentary, and it really makes me laugh & laugh. Soooo funny :) I mean, commentaries can be a little -a lot- nasty, but yet so funny :) juste love it. Even if I don't understand what Enoby/Evony/Ebony says sometimes.

Well, thanks for making me laugh so hard, and ... I'm waiting for the rest :)

(PS : if you want answer, my account in Serendipité - in french, of course)

And if someone coud explain me that stuff with the "preps" it would be very cool, thanks !
Patikkus chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
I'm laughing to hard to actually comment properly on this! OMFG! Looooove this!
Patikkus chapter 3 . 6/2/2011
Patikkus chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I laughed so hard at the fainting goat part! I'm definately reading the other chapters you commented on.
Ragan chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Isn't it sad that she actually sounds proud of this... thing. Kind of like Frankenstein's monster.