|Reviews for The End in the Show|
| ilioveharrypotter chapter 17 . 12/30/2013
This was a phenomenal story. The writing was beautifully done, your vocabulary is amazing and so create. It was incredible to read this, the plot was so interesting and suspenseful, and really emotional to read too. The best thing about the whole story though was your characterization, every single character was portrayed properly but also in a new, believable way. Amazing story!
| Camilinha chapter 17 . 5/16/2013
This story is amazing! I cried, I laughed, I cursed, and the best of all I loved! Congrats!
| Hanada Marie chapter 13 . 1/28/2013
You ARE Satan. I didn't know you lot got Internet in Hell.
| Hanada Marie chapter 12 . 1/28/2013
When did Satan start writing fanfiction? Do you secretly have the ninth piece of Voldemort's soul residing within you? No, but seriously this reads like something written by Steven Moffat.
| Hanada Marie chapter 10 . 1/28/2013
At this point, all I really wish to do is send death threats to your inbox. I'm still hoping this will be another fake death like Booth's in- what was it?-season four finale?
| Hanada Marie chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
I am crying. I have never gotten this into a fanfiction in awhile. Gah! Im going to stop now so I can continue to read.
| pnwer chapter 16 . 10/4/2012
This was among the very best written chapters of fan fiction I have ever read!
| GibsFunc chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I can't believe I forgot to add this to my favorites
| the dud pistachio chapter 17 . 4/3/2012
Wonderful story! I loved how you incorporated the flashbacks! It made it all the more lovely and all the more real! Thanks for the great read!
| jbohanon chapter 7 . 3/13/2012
I just wanted to say that I have read hundreds of fan literature, but i will say this is the first and only review I have ever written. I am astonished at your talent to write this story thus far, as well as this chapter. I was moved to tears and just wanted to take a moment to tell you how wonderful your writing truly is.
Best Wishes in all you do,
| bluemoon255 chapter 17 . 12/5/2011
really loved your story. your a good writer. hope to see more from you.
| bluemoon255 chapter 8 . 12/5/2011
you made me tear up. wow it was intense
| bluemoon255 chapter 7 . 12/5/2011
that was heartbreaking. you are a very good writer.
| marceline19 chapter 17 . 11/13/2011
Great story! The only one which makes me cry!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
While I love the plot - it's an intriguing introduction to your fanfiction - it's almost frustrating to read. I don't know if you ever watched the tv show "Friends", but this scene is kind of what your writing in this story reminds me of:
I've read your writing before, and I always appreciate the plots of your stories.
However, UNNECESSARILY increasing the complexity of the language makes the experience of reading FICTION less enjoyable. It becomes difficult to become absorbed in a story when it reads like a vocabulary lesson.
Also, please recheck definitions of the words "intellectual", "allotted", "diffused", and "dubiously", dear.
Scotch tends to be drank from a tumbler, and it is VERY RARELY filled to the brim, because it is so strong.
The Jeffersonian's parking lot is inside. If she was "on the way to my car" she wouldn't've been stabbed "just outside" the Jeffersonian.
Brennan's revolver in the series is a .50, not .357, as stated in season 3 episode 5, although I'm sure that was a liberty on your part, since you've clearly seen the episode, having referenced Brennan shooting Booth in it.
Also, watch your punctuation.